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General Thoughts On Last Chapter of BW?

Just asking. I'm feeling rusty and, you know, maybe a bit insecure. Just a bit.

Also, yes, this chapter was important. In its own way. Things did happen, even if it was just silly cat nonsense. Seemingly.

Anyway, just asking. Give me your thoughts!

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Honestly, fair. I was kinda hoping that the last chapters, and how they worked into the arc, would have been enough...but its been a bit, eh? Some of the impact is missing, especially without a full reread. And I can't expect people to do that. That would be a bit much. What I mean is that there was prior leadup. And stuff. But yer right. Dang it. Uh... Might do something about that.

Blackmarch

*Nod nods*

Blackmarch

Right, serious feedback time: It was good, all around. A bit low-impact, but the humour made up for that. Naruto's segment was good character interaction, and Sakura's approach to the problem was fun, too. The smash cut with 1010 was a fun ending. The only real complaint I have is that it kind of felt like Sasuke was just 'there' for some of it.

Alulim Eridug

I enjoyed it. Always have the apprehension of which way Sasuke's neuroses are going to drive him, but the catnip ending was very nice. I also enjoyed the post credits scene with Tenten

Patrick J


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