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We Live In An MMO?! - Chapter 15 [EARLY ACCESS]

Hey everyone! Chapter 15 is finally out, but for supporters only! I hope you enjoy the read, and feel free to let me know what you think in the comments! I look forward to your feedback! Once again, I'm sorry it took so long (around 6 months), but it's finally done! My apologies for missing out on last week's weekly update by the way! Truth be told, I was almost hospitalised on Saturday but decided to remedy my issue at home as much as I could before it came that. Old fans of RandoWis might recall that I used to be hospitalised every few years due to intestinal issues that I carry with me since birth. Last Friday, complications from these same issues resurfaced once again which forced me to take things easy and, unfortunately, starve myself from food and water for around 30 hours so as to not increase the chances of escalating the issue further. Thankfully, I didn't end up in the hospital this time! I'm feeling better now, albeit more careful with my diet, so no worries! Though, as a result, I could not finish this chapter by last weekend and I had to skip out on the weekly update. My apologies! Unfortunately to make up for last weekend, I ended up spending a few days this week finishing up this chapter once and for all, hence the upload today. I'll be spending the rest of the week working on the next YouTube video, but after what happened last weekend, I may consider taking a week off after this next video is uploaded. I've noticed that ever since this year began, I've failed to give myself a break from producing content. In fact, I've messed up so many times with scheduling, it's as though nothing has changed since coming back from Japan. I'd like to reflect on it and update you this weekend, but just a heads up! Nonetheless, thank you for your love and support, as always! Love you much much, and I'll see you in the next post! ♥ Looking forward to your thoughts about the latest chapter! (*Note that changes and corrections may be made for the public release!) -RandoWis

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Comments

Fantastic work!! I really liked all of the closeup shots of the sentries helmets, especially the one pov shot from their view, very cool! You could really get a feel for their thought processes

Tariko

Alright, noted! Please don't feel gaslighted into thinking it's an issue on your reading! Now that you've pointed it out, I too can see what you mean! Thank you so much for the feedback and helping me improve! Moving forward, I'll be sure to try and illustrate actions clearer with these notes in mind!

RandoWis

No problem. The lunge attack on page 12, it a pretty clear read onwards to pages 13 and 14 but page 15 I wasn't entirely sure if Lu completely stop the attack or there was still some forward motion going against the block. I do believe the motion on the hair and speed lines do indicate that but the blade itself seem still on impact. Page 20 the guard attacks at an angle from above, looking back on it a few times I see there was a change in perspective onwards to page 22 to show how close that attack was and how it was stopped but it almost looks like the distant between Lu and the guard had changed. Like I said pretty minor, I looked it over again and questioned if this is more of a misread on my part. Also the pages numbers I mention are how its been separated on here and not on the comic itself.

Love4Chubbs

Hey there Love4Chubbs, thanks for the feedback! Do you mind telling me which parts exactly seemed off and why? I'd like to see where I can improve for future chapters if possible!

RandoWis

Action packed and very nicely done, a minor gripe for me would be certain angles and impact seem a little off when looking at the next panel but nothing major still reads perfectly fine. Well worth the wait, I hope all is well and your recovering nicely.

Love4Chubbs

30 hours without water or food? o.O I feel you are fighting as strongly as your characters do! <3 Great job, we love your work! (and you being healthy)

ChoseBinne

Holy shit! The wait was worth it! You're the best Rando, keep going!

Irashin


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