My Son's Girlfriend (Chapter 5)
Added 2025-03-14 19:08:04 +0000 UTCChapter 5: https://imgchest.com/p/6eyrveb9l4p
Update on the Upcoming Content:
š The Inside the Characters for this story will be uploaded in a few hours (Iāve also updated the layout compared to the previous story)
š Chapter 6 will be available in less than 24 hours
About The Story:
In the last chapter, Alina mentioned that it had been four days since they last had sex, but technically, even though it was Chapter 4, they were only on their third day there.
I realized that each chapter corresponds to a day (except for the first, which was "Day 0"), so Iām considering adding the day number to the title moving forward.
Starting next chapterā¦ things are about to get funš
About This Chapter:
I changed the site I use for screenshots (since mine isnāt working anymore), and I made two mistakes that Iāll be fixing.
The first mistake: I accidentally left the header in the conversation between Michael and Angelaā¦ so Iāll have to rewrite that part (because I'm a perfectionistš ).
The second mistake: The last conversation between Jake and Alina ended up slightly wider than the others because I forgot to adjust the size . Honestly, wider is better, but I want to keep everything consistent, so Iāll have to rewrite that one too (also because Iām a perfectionistš )
Comments
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Omega6464
2025-03-16 01:27:26 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter, canāt wait for chapter 6!
Matt
2025-03-15 12:56:20 +0000 UTCThanksā¤ļø
HBO AMC
2025-03-15 10:14:35 +0000 UTCAlso, at the end of chapter 5 it says "End of chapter 4" on the picture š«”
Shinsuke
2025-03-15 10:08:18 +0000 UTCI hadn't thought about it... that's geniusš
HBO AMC
2025-03-15 08:35:54 +0000 UTCResubscribed for this ā¤ļø
BimboBlonde
2025-03-15 08:29:02 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter, loving it so far ! Pace is really good š«”Nice work Also the "mistake" about the wider text make it looks like the parents have old phone with small screen and the younger one have wide screen. Looks like a small detail more than a mistake šWould've been a crazy detail if it was on purpose from the start
Shinsuke
2025-03-14 19:16:10 +0000 UTC
