My BF's Work Bully (Chapter 12)
Added 2025-02-24 13:12:12 +0000 UTCBefore diving into this chapter, I want to mention that I made a slight adjustment to the ending of the last one (the meaning remains the same). You’ll find the revised version at the start of this chapter.
The climax is here, and I’m so excited (and a little nervous) to share it with you. This is the first time I’ve written something like this, so I’d really love to hear your honest thoughts. Let me know what you think!😊
Chapter 12: https://imgchest.com/p/qe4geqwmk7j
Comments
Magnificent writing
Rygwyn315
2025-02-25 11:28:00 +0000 UTCGreat story. A bit rushed with the sex and two guys talking about it isn’t that hot. But good story otherwise. Hope you stick with reluctance cheating for your next story
Thomas
2025-02-25 07:21:10 +0000 UTCI agree with you! By far the best story, and I've read a lot 😅 but this and last chapter felt to fast. One of the hotest things was her reluctance, and feel like it vanished to fast. But I'm nit-picking, still a great story, and not everyone feels like me :) looking forward to more stories from you!
John
2025-02-24 14:55:08 +0000 UTCThanks🙏
HBO AMC
2025-02-24 14:23:14 +0000 UTCI really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts😊 This chapter was definitely a bit of a setup to get everything in place for the next one, especially to bring "this Vina" for the finale. I needed Jovan and Steve’s conversation to create the basis for what’s coming in the next chapter. I can definitely agree that a few more chapters might have worked better, but I was worried that the "back-and-forth" between Jovan and Vina could start to feel repetitive or lose its impact after a while.
HBO AMC
2025-02-24 14:22:51 +0000 UTCThis is great!
Amitony
2025-02-24 14:05:49 +0000 UTCReally enjoyed this story, saw it on a reddit and decided you deserved a follow on here. But this chapter feels like it went too quickly, the jump from resisting over text to blowjob and sex was fast and it all being told through texts between Jovan and Steve felt like the least hot way to go. I'm sure others will really enjoy it though, and I'm still excited to read more chapters and whatever you have planned next.
DownToTheSubway
2025-02-24 13:54:34 +0000 UTC
