I had a few different endings to this Jennifer/Walky sequence. Originally, I had Walky muse about other people who've had things "way worse than me an' were left to themselves," which is meant to indicate Ethan, who lost a friend and/or sex partner and was largely left to be all emo by himself for four months. And so Walky leaves to crawl up into Ethan's bed Jennifer-style and ends up wedging himself between Ethan and Asher, who's also still up there. I liked it! ...but it's kind of a super stretch to get to that sudden left-turn, and I couldn't find a better way to connect the dots to make it make better sense to me, other than having Walky flat-out state to the audience: "ETHAN! I'M TALKING ABOUT ETHAN!!!"
Plus I wanted this sequence to really focus on Jennifer and Walky. This was detouring from that. So I started over.

This second take got to be too listy. And it left things in a place I didn't want to leave them, for worse transitions to later story stuffs. So I threw this out, too!

And ended up with this strip of concentrated Jennifer/Walky interaction. There's that faux-sibling vibe I was looking for.
Michael Steamweed
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