Shards of me - 155
Added 2025-05-09 21:12:42 +0000 UTC
Comments
I love the mysterious & intriguing atmosphere you evoke. Just amazing art!
Edward Clarke
2025-05-29 22:50:22 +0000 UTCHey, thank you so much for your kind words about the drawings, I truly appreciate them! I’m really glad you’re enjoying the artwork. As for the storyline, I completely understand how it can be hard to follow. The technique I used for Edfried’s memories involves fragmented flashbacks, where we don’t go through a situation from beginning to end. That obviously made things more complex. It was a miscalculation on my part, because in my head I’ve always thought of this project as a printed volume, so the pacing of the story reflects that kind of reading experience. That said, I hope the plot will feel clearer once you reread Chapter 6 all together, and good news, you won’t have to wait long for that. Another thing that makes it harder to follow the storyline is the slow release of pages over time, which I know doesn’t help with such a layered plot, improving my speed is definitely at the top of my priority list. Thank you so much for your feedback, it means a lot to me, and I truly take it to heart. And thank you again for all the support you’ve given me so far!
AKE
2025-05-15 20:16:38 +0000 UTCAs always, the art is incredible, sublime, but somehow, the story is lagging in pace and purpose and seems to go nowhere. I Am totally lost, sorry
Luis Muñozcano
2025-05-15 17:27:49 +0000 UTCVery cool!
Maurizio
2025-05-09 21:13:30 +0000 UTC
