Suggestions 10/19/22
Added 2022-10-19 23:59:51 +0000 UTCHello all, I’m making this as a thread for idea discussion. Do you have an idea you’d like to see in the story? Or maybe a suggestion to improve my writing? Leave your reply here.
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I have no intentions of having Jeannine and Nick get together. Apart from some teasing, they’re just friends. As for the interaction, you’ll see more of it. I’m planning some more for Nick, Ori, and the general population. It’s usually aware, but I do have one big unaware scene planned at this time.
Jake Barry
2022-10-24 22:22:35 +0000 UTCMight be jumping the gun, but some more direct interaction with the tinies is appreciated! Could be intentional like is has been, but I would like to see other characters interact with Jeannine directly as well. Or it could also go unaware, I’d be super interested in seeing how an unaware interaction would go as well. And of course, anything progressing some type of romance or more personal interaction between Jeannine and Nick would be nice to see, more interested in how they would show physical love despite their size difference.
Morgan Freeman
2022-10-24 10:15:57 +0000 UTCCould be an interesting concept for a different story in the same or similar world. I’ll think about it!
Jake Barry
2022-10-22 03:09:58 +0000 UTCOkay I got another one a chapter that introduces a mix size family with all the three races like the youngest being a Lilliputian boy 13 or 14 named Jacob, middle child being a Gulliverian being 16 year old named Molly, and the oldest being brob 18 named sally and both parents being brobs as well who don’t see size as a problem and loved they adopted the other two children but also hated by their neighbors and fellow brobs who thinks it unnatural and weird but their love for each other is stronger and meet one or all of the main cast later on and give them the idea or image of a brighter future for all the three races to come together one day. 🎤 drop booooom!!! I think I made my point thank you I will be here all night
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2022-10-20 17:16:49 +0000 UTC
