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Harry Potter: Unleashed part 34 - The First Task

Shortly after breakfast ended, Harry and Fleur were forced to split up because Madam Maxine wanted time to talk to her Champions about...

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Comments

Was this abandoned?

theus gp

Honestly my guy, I would buy this story off the shelf in a heartbeat.

Andrew

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

evgeny

My question is how does Harry go from having a birthday where he turns fifteen and then in later chapters he’s fourteen again?

whyme

How does the magic of the chalice punish if someone interferes illegally in an attempt to harm the tournament participants, does this mean that the pink frog (Umbridge) will suffer consequences of its actions?

theus gp

Please, feel sorry for our hearts, don't take so long to post more chapters of this fanfic wonder

theus gp

Loving the story! And ditto to what Travis said. I love the way you’ve scaled things up to reflect the capabilities of your characters

My Fun

Hope it won't be too long until we see how Harry does.

Omeganian

That is a significantly evolved and more exciting test than the original. I can only hope the second Task will get a similar treatment, because I feel sorry for the "spectators" of that one.

Travis Clemens


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