The fixes for this page is more subtle than page 1's. More of a cleanup really~
The original page was made before I had gotten used to drawing wallflower. So the messed up lines of the original and the weird panel 5 were bothering me.
Wheew lad~
I'm happy with the comic now.
Now onto the lineart for the Luna sex path~
TwilightIsMagic
2020-08-16 18:09:43 +0000 UTCGameNerdy
2020-08-16 16:44:38 +0000 UTC