The Uneelie Ch 1 Pt 1
Added 2023-06-11 07:23:06 +0000 UTCPASSWORD: DEMODROP
Return home to Nipa Beach for the summer from college...and discover far more than you ever wanted to.
๐ Meet your mother and old friends.
๐ Try and fail to deal with your grief.
๐ Meet a very adorable yellow tabby cat named Waffles and a loveable german shepherd named Luna!
๐ Decide your past relationships. Did you have a partner that was tragically taken from you too soon? Or were you entangled in a now-failed friends-with-benefits relationship that's bitter with regret?
This is the first part of Chapter One: The Beginning of the End. It currently sits at around 13,800 words.
As always, if you come across any errors or typos, feel free to send me some screenshots!
Comments
Oh that's nice to know, thank you!
Konoi Kurozora
2023-06-14 23:20:17 +0000 UTCYou do have the option of having had feelings for both Morgan & Cam without having been in an actual โrelationshipโ with either! The past friendships/relationships are picked apart more later.
Dakota
2023-06-14 02:45:00 +0000 UTCAaah, how dare you end the demo on a cliffhanger! And a literal one at that... No but in all seriousness, it's intriguing so far. A bit too short for me to give a deeper feedback, but I'm curious to know more. A small question though - we get to decide if MC was in a relationship with Morgan or in a sort of "friends with benefits" situation with Cam in the past... I really wanted to have a MC who had feelings for Cam, but never acted upon them. If we pick the option that both of them were MC's friends instead of the romance oriented options, will we get a choice in the future that would let us decide the MC had feelings for one or the other, or is an actual past relationship the only way for the MC to have had feelings in the past? I think losing someone with things unsaid like that is pretty different from losing someone one was in a relationship with after all.
Konoi Kurozora
2023-06-11 17:21:27 +0000 UTC
