Disenchanted Ch 1
Added 2022-04-03 21:52:11 +0000 UTCPassword: PATREONKEY
The first chapter of Disenchanted is here! Haven't set a public release date yet, but here's the Patreon version of the demo.
Word count w/ coding: 22,012
Word count w/o coding: N/A (working on it)
Have a nightmare and wake up for your move-in day at college! Meet your best friend, Viktor, and roommate, Theo. Also meet Charlie, Viktor's roommate, and Penelope, a siren and fellow student. There's also this upperclassman that's uncomfortable around you named Harlow.
Oh, and Cameron and Luci. They're...also there. Unfortunately for you.
If you encounter any glitches or game-breaking errors (praying you don't my friends and I beta'd the crap out of this) just let me know over on Tumblr or here on Patreon.
Comments
Congratulations!
Tom Veenstra
2022-04-04 01:10:56 +0000 UTCYay I loved it! The end feels a bit abrupt though, is there a particular reason to end it there? Maybe it will make more sense when chapter 2 comes. Im already seeing the characters as more 3 dimensional now they get to interact together 😁
Kimbo jimbo
2022-04-04 01:04:09 +0000 UTCCongratulations! Can't wait to play it!
shay
2022-04-03 22:34:23 +0000 UTCScrolling seems to be working now! I'm so excited to read this, I love Viktor and his family already and I can't wait to meet Theo <3
Erin Harding
2022-04-03 22:33:43 +0000 UTCI appreciate it! I *think* I have those bugs fixed, I enabled scrollbars in itch.io which might have been the problem with the page cutting off. The tail thing is my own fault with coding lol.
Dakota
2022-04-03 22:30:39 +0000 UTCAlso, another little thing. When you choose to be a siren, and then choose to have a tail, the option to make your tail blue isn't a choice, just text. no big deal or anything, I just thought I'd let you know :)
Erin Harding
2022-04-03 22:28:05 +0000 UTCI'm playing on a mac laptop
Erin Harding
2022-04-03 22:25:19 +0000 UTCHi! Would you happen to be on mobile or desktop/laptop?
Dakota
2022-04-03 22:19:10 +0000 UTCSo I fixed it by changing the font size to 80% so I could see the whole page, but there still seems to be an issue with not being able to scroll up or down. Idk if its somehow an issue on my end or not, but I wanted to let you know in case its a bug :)
Erin Harding
2022-04-03 22:11:10 +0000 UTCHey! idk if its just me, but when I hit the page that begins with "You hear him sigh outside the door, "Good. They'll be happy to see you; they're worried.", there's nowhere to click to go to the next page and there's no way to scroll down.
Erin Harding
2022-04-03 22:07:39 +0000 UTCCongratulations!! I’m very excited to play 🤍
Ella
2022-04-03 21:57:06 +0000 UTCCongrats!!
Sydney
2022-04-03 21:56:47 +0000 UTC
