Ranma Mobuseka teaser chapter
Added 2026-02-08 03:40:49 +0000 UTCComments
took me longer than normal to get to this one, but i enjoyed it. its a bit long in the setup, and learning the language im sure will slow things down in the next one, but i do love the source material for mobuseka, and look forward to more of this.
Gappler
2026-02-27 18:10:18 +0000 UTCVery much approve, hope to see more eventually.
Treant Balewood
2026-02-19 03:44:18 +0000 UTCGreat start i really hope this gets picked up as a choice option soon
Alec Fowler
2026-02-14 11:40:12 +0000 UTCGreat teaser, and definitely a story I'm looking forward to reading in full.
MacArther
2026-02-13 14:58:11 +0000 UTCIntresting story idea
Bryan Brown
2026-02-11 17:31:11 +0000 UTCDefinitely one I'm looking forward to possibly reading more of in the future, there are way too few good Mobseka fics... and as per usual, you will have one of the most unique takes on a crossover with it. With Third Path complete and a couple of others winding down, if I remember rightly, I really hope this one enters the rotation choices.
Jonathan Wesson
2026-02-09 21:52:26 +0000 UTCthink you meant balm rather than balsam, but I'm glad you liked the fic. Will talk more via the email you're working on already, LOL, although no rush.
vimesenthusiast
2026-02-09 16:21:25 +0000 UTCThanks, I like to think my writing's gotten better as I've gone along. Agree the negaverse demon was a great plot tool. Yes. Ranma can crush it in one-on-one or in most dungeons, but not all, and even in some like the one he's stuck in now, there are monsters that can challenge him. However, against mechs or at range, yeah, he's gonna need to grow. Sassy Kasumi is going to take a bit, but yeah, the kernel is already there.
vimesenthusiast
2026-02-09 16:19:35 +0000 UTCI'll explain things as I go. I think other people have said I'm pretty good at that kind of thing.
vimesenthusiast
2026-02-09 16:14:06 +0000 UTCSeen. Since I get the impression Hiryo's going to go over the chapter LOL, I will wait until he's got it back to me before changing that. No point in doing it twice.
vimesenthusiast
2026-02-09 16:13:34 +0000 UTCHmm... if I ever get a chance to continue this, I might show Akane's reaction a bit, but only her first flush type reaction. Not down the line. Sorry.
vimesenthusiast
2026-02-09 16:12:46 +0000 UTCThis is FUN. And I'm a sucker for Kasumi, she was always the best of the sisters. You managed to make Akane as annoying as she is in the source material; she's one of my most hated anime girls. I hope she finds out Ranma and Kasumi are happily together at some point.
MultiverseCosms
2026-02-09 07:05:39 +0000 UTC"Finishing his rep, he flipped himself forward, doing a little pure wet in midair as he pushed himself off the ground one final time to clear the side of the pond...." I believe you meant Pirouette rather than Pure wet in this section. Even though a pirouette is not a correct use for the in air flip you were probably trying to convey.
Aaron Orr
2026-02-09 06:56:48 +0000 UTCwell this was a fun read although i have 0 knowledge on Mobuseka? so quite a bit of this made me draw a blank
Eragon Gravelyn
2026-02-09 01:31:40 +0000 UTCI love this, Mobuseka is a series that seriously needs more fanfiction. Ranma/Angelica/Kasumi is an amazing pairing choice.
Karnath
2026-02-09 00:58:52 +0000 UTCFellow readers, spoilers ahead, read at your own risk!!! Heya Vim first and foremost, thank you for the “semi-gift!!!” Due that, I will enjoy reading it first and will send you in a few days the usual corrections. What a great beginning already!!! Kasumi’s pout is definitely a weapon of finesse. ^^ Such a as good as it gets conversation between the three of them, only due Kasumi’s help. Even more so Ranma and Kasumi realizing due them playing together even more about themselves and each other! I’m really glad you chose to show them 3 playing together as the beginning of this fanfic, shows a lot there! The reason of the transfer is so poetic justice and fun!!! Thank you for me having being roflmaoing there!!! XD XD XD Now the reveal about Kasumi’ save her two things at the end is telling!!! ^^ Really an awesome reason why they are there in this Mobuseka So refreshing how Kasumi and Ranma are being together!!! Great reason of Ranma’s changing form and Kasumi thinking about it. Damn, this bantering of Kasumi and Ranma is written so awesome!!!! What a greeting with the robot and Kasumi’s action are so wonderful!!! Hahhhah, I love the AI Phaeron you created and through it you can rant all your stuff out too. ^^ I love the balance of Ranma and Kasumi in that fanfic, also with showing what Kasumi goes through and talks about and thus how she changed and dealt with everything is sooo good!!! Now you let me wonder what Phareon’s long-term plans are. This will be really interesting as the story develops!!! You making Ranma/Kasumi/Angelica happen, alone is enough for me and you being excused for not pairing Mylene with Ranma!!! You getting after so long another Ranma paired with Kasumi is simple a balsam to my soul! The post-author notes I’ll answer and discuss with you along with the corrections I’ll send you. Only one point will I add here, that Ranma will be surely annoyed internally with someone flirting with Kasumi without realizing, as you said, until later that he was all this time in love with Kasumi! As soon as I saw you releasing this chapter, I know it’s an awesome one, also, in my opinion, as soon as the next Ranma story is done, I’d like to have this continued!!! by Hiryo Read ya soon . . . .
Hiryo
2026-02-08 22:09:42 +0000 UTCThis should be a full story, this was excellent. This was also the best intruding character(s) to a new world set up you have done in any of your stories so far, there was an appropriate set up that was not too heavily backstory, introduces both Ranma and Kasumi a bit to the world they end up in, and the Negaverse Demon fits really well with this (among other things, Ranma and Sailor Moon mesh well together in terms of how abilities work on one fits seamlessly in the other), and having a Youma try to farm despair from Alto Libre fits both Sailor Moon and the canon game in Mobesuka too, so everything just fits together smoothly in a way that most of your other stories don't quite manage at the start. On top of that, the power levels of Ranma and the world of Mobesuka are also good fits, Ranma will be stronger than any person he comes across, but he is not strong enough on his own to overcome the strongest Mechs, and the tech of both Old and New Humans will allow for some people to bridge the gap an be threats even outside of mechs. Plus, Sassy Kasumi is something we all need.
Aaron Hardin
2026-02-08 16:20:16 +0000 UTCGreat Story! I do hope you go forward with this story.
Zach Rodencal
2026-02-08 16:04:29 +0000 UTCMan what a teaser, thanks for sharing!
Netveiwer
2026-02-08 15:49:19 +0000 UTCWooooooo! Ranma/Mobuseka! Great teaser. Love the detailed outline, the pairing is peak and finally another Ranma/Kasumi/+1 story. Nice.
Razgriz0x
2026-02-08 07:48:31 +0000 UTC
