Bhaalson Remodel Chapter 7
Added 2020-09-17 05:08:42 +0000 UTCHey guys, here is the next chapter of Bhaalson
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Yeah, Edwin always struck me as more ambitious and egotistical than sheer 'I will kill your children and burn your wife alive in front of you for shits because I can' type evil. I am not certain I am going to be able to portray the whole Harper love of True Neutrality thing when/if it comes up, but we will see.
vimesenthusiast
2021-01-18 20:33:37 +0000 UTCSo an interesting thing to note about "good" or "evil" alignment in DnD is that it is less about doing bad or good but more about what motivates you to do said deeds, this is a nuisance that a lot of writers in dnd setting miss, but I'm happy to say so far I don't see that being a problem in this story. So far you have managed to portray this very well when showing edwin's thought process and how it differs from the rest of the party so far.
NerdLord2nd
2021-01-16 14:50:00 +0000 UTCI too have been enjoying this story. The way to keep the number of characters low, the need to concentrate on Harry/Imoen and their allies, has allowed me to concentrate on using character interaction to world build instead of doing it via narration. And yeah... Harry isn't going to go along with what he thinks are stupid limitations. Nor is Imoen for very long. But first, she needs to meet someone who knows about runes. And he needs to meet a follower of Torm, Tyr, and Lethander.
vimesenthusiast
2020-12-07 21:03:42 +0000 UTCI absolutely love this story. Being a big DnD fan and enjoying the Baulders gate games this is right up my alley. All of your work is exceptional, but so far this is one of my all time favorites that you have written. I look forward to seeing more of it, and seeing what else is tucked away here on patreon that isnt on other forums. I am also greatly looking forward to seeing which deity harry is going to pick, The limitations of deity for paladins is one of the reasons i rarely play the class at all in any game, be it video or pen and paper.
Mark Quaker
2020-12-07 13:29:44 +0000 UTC
