Looking for Beta Readers
Added 2024-11-01 03:50:35 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
End of the month is here, and I managed to get my next book ready for a look over by some people. If you want to volunteer, give me a shout either in the comments here or send me a DM.
My new series is called Grimmwald. It's a steampunk humour mad science haremlit romp, featuring gloomy castles, Baba Yaga's spare car, creepy maids, and amorous werewolves.
I'm mainly looking for 3 things from betas:
1) Locating any inconsistencies/plot holes in the narrative.
2) Opinions on the pace, relationships, and banter.
3) Readability, in that how easy was it to read, where was it rough, and importantly, if you did stop reading, where and why?
Naturally, I'd love any feedback as well, positive or negative. What worked, what didn't. What could be expanded, where tightened. If this sounds like something you'd be interested in, let me know! And I'll give you a link.
Comments
If you still need readers I can have a crack at it!
Admiral Sheer
2024-11-02 15:36:41 +0000 UTCI'd be happy to
Abraxas
2024-11-01 09:05:36 +0000 UTCI'd be happy to volunteer to beta read!
toxdaniel
2024-11-01 08:41:44 +0000 UTCI'm happy to take a crack at it. I'm a fan and one of the better ways to improve at writing is reading + feedback and discussion.
Ethan Graves
2024-11-01 07:44:09 +0000 UTCSure, count me in as a volunteer if you haven't already got enough folks.
Spaceman86
2024-11-01 07:11:41 +0000 UTCIt seems interesting, I would certainly love to give you some feedback
Octofang
2024-11-01 06:01:20 +0000 UTCDefinitely interested!
V01D
2024-11-01 05:56:17 +0000 UTCHappy to help if you'll have ne
jms
2024-11-01 03:57:44 +0000 UTCAs a fellow writer, I am more than happy to help you out! Say the word, and I'm there!
John Teets
2024-11-01 03:51:50 +0000 UTC
