Whispers of the Dark Elf(Chapter 1) Trial Version
Added 2024-03-03 04:11:55 +0000 UTCHello Everyone,
I'm excited to share the Free Trial version of my game with all of you. This version provides an opportunity for everyone to experience the game and get a feel for how it works. The release of this trial version brings me great joy, and I sincerely hope you enjoy the experience.
For my subscribers, I've posted a separate version of the trial that includes an additional scene. If you're a subscriber, please download the trial from my other post to unlock this extra content.
Your feedback is invaluable to me, so if you come across any bugs or have any thoughts about my game, please don't hesitate to share them. I'm eager to hear your opinions, and I'm committed to continuous improvement in both my art and storytelling.
https://mega.nz/file/hr1TVLTJ#vM--Msidz-TivIFPTQKGtD6LQ2bDkRTajrH0ZD6dTkw
here is the download Mega link of the trial version(IF YOU ARE A SUBSCRIBER PLEASE DOWNLOAD THE GAME FROM MY OTHER POST).
Thanks Everyone!
Comments
Exactly. Yes.
Jazuke Taizago
2024-04-26 20:34:49 +0000 UTCU mean like a secret NTR ou SNTR, MC never find out about it.
Scarlet
2024-04-26 20:13:27 +0000 UTCI will try my best Jazuke to make a good NTR Game,I hope you can enjoy the history of my game until the end.
Darthz
2024-04-01 06:10:41 +0000 UTCI'm the new guy here, Subscriber, i mean. Decided to like what i saw mostly. But i have a completely different take to something. I have zero interest in Corruption or Blackmail content. There's too much out there, and it has become incredibly stale. Rarely anything that isn't that. I do not mind the girls are natural Size Queens and rather willing to cheat and have sex with other men, actively and on their own without being convinced. It is a bore if we are gonna formulate excuses for them to jump on a dick. Just for once give me a proper Unavoidable Hidden/Secret (MC doesn't find out) NTR Game, for a change. Thanks for this Game Project! Take care!
Jazuke Taizago
2024-03-29 23:40:51 +0000 UTCThe idea was more for the final chapter ending. π
SparkyZinger
2024-03-21 02:47:00 +0000 UTCHey sparky,thanks for the feedback,so i just plan to make 1 ending.I choose that because is my first game and I don't want to make things complicated π ,and also this is the chapter 1 of my story, so i kind need that story to be linked to my next chapter.And about Sephira have sex with other man,this will happen at some point.I plan to introduce some choices and multiple endings on my chapter 2 but i didn't decided yet.
Darthz
2024-03-20 19:47:34 +0000 UTCHmm, I was thinking Sephira should have two stats to help determine the endings, which would be Love and Lust. If Glavius has more lust and love than Aldos, Sephira will leave to be with Glavius. If Glavius only has Sephira's lust, then we get the cheating ending, where Sephira continues to happily and willingly cheat a clueless Aldos with Glavius, which could be a much longer ending showing multiple sex scenes. Another thing to determine Sephira's ending is if she has sex with other men besides Glavius and Aldos.
SparkyZinger
2024-03-20 17:27:02 +0000 UTC100% behind it. I know she's a side character but I feel that makes it more important to give Tanya a proper lengthy scene with Glavius, especially since this is our first actual introduction to him in the story.
GamingSavant
2024-03-07 04:51:34 +0000 UTCI've posted about the idea of remaking that scene. If there's interest, I'll definitely go ahead with the remake.
Darthz
2024-03-07 04:46:40 +0000 UTCMy one hope and idea for improvement is add an alternate perspective and longer version to Tanya's scene with Glavius. The scene had almost no set up to it, and despite idolizing Gladius, Tanya didn't seem the type to just instantly jump ship to having sex with him. Maybe have it from Glavius's point of view as he seduced her and then show an extended version of the sex they have while they make Aldos wait?
GamingSavant
2024-03-07 04:09:47 +0000 UTCTbh, not eveyone enjoys the massive buildup, as it can get overbearing. I do enjoy the pace it sets up, makes the elfs feel more like they have a base slut level you can exploit. Very hot.
Broseph Stinson
2024-03-06 17:27:30 +0000 UTCI liked the game, I was left with good impressions and therefore Iβm looking forward to the continuation. Special thanks for the animation and sounds during scenes, itβs always nice + the animations are done quite smoothly (for some reason other developers do it in 2-3 frames). I hope there will be scenes with double penetration))) Austin Pugh correctly noted that the story writing needs to be improved so that the dialogue flows smoothly into the scene, but please don't drag out the story too much or it will get boring. The sexual pace depends on the type of couple, what he is talking about is only suitable for a young couple who have just started a relationship. We have a couple who have children, which means they know what sex is (itβs stupid to talk about deflowering in this case), so all that remains is to break the girl, and for this you donβt need to drag it out for several chapters (maybe they have something before already happened - by the way, this can also be a reason for hatred). In general, this moment is quite difficult; you canβt please everyone.
Remiss
2024-03-06 14:24:05 +0000 UTCThank you so much for your feedback! As this is my first game, I truly value your input. I'm committed to improving, and I'll make an effort to incorporate some of your suggestions.
Darthz
2024-03-06 05:00:49 +0000 UTCThe game was fine but was lacking in terms of sexual pacing and writing. Its important to remember that NTR stories are ultimately about tension and build up as much as they are about the sexual acts themselves. Ideally, you should focus on hints and the chase for the first third of the story. The goal is to make the viewer look forward to future content as this will enhance the quality of future scenes and allow you to make a more explosive and dramatic scene. Lastly, I've always considered the penis reveal, deflowering, creampie, and falling scenes to be the major H-scenes in NTR and you shouldn't waste them. While you may not be able to change the script now I'd honestly suggest slowing down the story and slowly building corruption in the next game. It makes a wildly better game and story. Moving onto art and animation I found them to be acceptable and decent but is hurt by the lack of individuality. Your art lack any real flair or personality that would distinguishes it from other creators. Rather the art felt 'safe' and standard. I'd suggest trying to better communicate yourself and your own eros through the art better. Next, your animations were relatively smooth but lacked any explosive power or weight that takes an animation to the next level. The sound effects were well appreciated and loved how you added a diversity of sounds to signal different points in a given scenes. For example most creators wouldn't add a different sound effect for the beginning of a blowjob as well as the normal sucking action sound. That really assist in producing an atmosphere which is important. I hope to see more. Regardless I'm glad you gave us a demo to try out and are open to suggestions. It was helpful and can't wait to see what you create.
Austin Pugh
2024-03-06 04:17:18 +0000 UTCMy subscribers can access the Patreon version of the trial for $8 or $4. The Patreon version is available in a separate post.
Darthz
2024-03-05 04:16:44 +0000 UTChi, I have a question, is the extra content for the $8 subscription included in this version?
Gael
2024-03-05 03:57:43 +0000 UTCNew fan here! Looking forward to further updates!
Enrico
2024-03-04 20:58:40 +0000 UTCThe version for Patreons contains one extra scene from the third act. It's available once you complete the game. However, if you're referring to the last two scenes from the first act, I haven't finished those yet. I'm still working on it,I just put there because they are part from the first act.π
Darthz
2024-03-04 17:40:20 +0000 UTCIs this version any different from the version for Patrons? (eg there are some scenes in the free version that are not available)
Duong
2024-03-04 14:45:33 +0000 UTCI don't blame you, those sprites are a bit difficult to use hahaha, you have to make the movement look as natural as possible which is a bit difficult and forces you to check every detail of the model thoroughly, I hope you manage to use them correctly at some point :)
SFukuro
2024-03-04 04:32:59 +0000 UTCThanks, SFukuro! That was a nice review. I will take a look at those bugs and correct them later. As for the sprite animations, I tried before, but the results were not as I expected, so I gave up. Maybe in my next project, I will try again.π
Darthz
2024-03-04 03:03:04 +0000 UTCWell, for now I found two small errors (I'm not very good at explaining, but I'll do my best). The first error I found is that some dialogs seem to go out of the text box which is a bit annoying if you are a player like me who likes to read, maybe this happens because as you also make a Japanese version I guess you just copy and paste some text, I recommend you to check them before to avoid this problem, although I didn't see this error in all the texts, in the few that I found it a bit annoying. And the second error is that the sprites of Galvius and Sephira were seen between the trees of the final part before destroying the pillars, therefore the sprites were also in the camp. For now those were the bugs I found, the rest I see a game with a lot of potential, the only thing I miss is that the sprites are animated during the sex situations (I'm not used to that kind of sprites because of the Henteria Chronicles saga hahaha) although that kind of animated sprites are a bit difficult to make (and if you have them made by an artist they can be expensive) it wouldn't be a bad idea to consider using that kind of animated sprites with some scenes.
SFukuro
2024-03-04 02:42:48 +0000 UTCIt's now visible since 11 minutes ago! Great! ^^ EDIT: Btw, I wish you all the best for your project! (And life as well, if you are a decent bloke. ;) )
ha haha
2024-03-03 21:50:34 +0000 UTCPersonally I like the idea of including an exclusive additional scene for those who support you in Patreon, because it is a way to thank the support and also serves as a little motivation to be Patreons, maybe for the moment I won't become a Patreon, but when the game is a little more advanced in its development and you keep including additional scenes then I will become a Patreon. In the meantime congratulations for the launch and much success with your game :)
SFukuro
2024-03-03 18:57:54 +0000 UTCif you just added tags like #ntr there
Magine buu
2024-03-03 15:40:07 +0000 UTCI already have a post there i just don't know i post on the right place: https://f95zone.to/threads/whispers-of-the-dark-elf-rpgmaker-elf-ntr-game-trial-version-available.182648/
Darthz
2024-03-03 15:11:10 +0000 UTCCompletly agree, if the game is free, might as well post it there ! I personaly discover a lot of games there, and got a lot of player from here too !
Screwthename
2024-03-03 14:13:47 +0000 UTCIf I see it correctly this is not yet on F95zone. I highly recommend putting it up there, especially before someone else does. Would get you more potential players in my opinion.
ha haha
2024-03-03 13:29:13 +0000 UTC
