Looking Forward

OK, I'll chirp in. I agree that tantalizing is good. But, you've already made the tension pretty strong, so there probably should be a real advancement. Not a leap, mind you, but something that (as previous mentions suggest) don't make it seem like a DmD or DF endless wait. Also, blecch on the girlfriend.

Ignatz

The maid scenes were on point, i look forward to getting to know her

SeniorBurrito

I also want to add that once mom starts undressing and the "unexpected" assets spills out, it will be very satisfying and a big holy shit moment. I want the erotica to build up but NOT too long. Games like Dual Family and DmD takes waaay too long for the major reveal. Too long that I stopped supporting. Keep up the good work. BTW the MC privates is a little too big.

GB

Agree with Fuuuu I really like the arc you are setting up for the mom. Her disposition and mannerism are realistic for a prim and proper mother. The not so revealing apparel and tidy school teacher hair style leaves it up to your imagination of whats underneath which I think is a major component of good Erotica. The "accidental" stuff per Bambin is a clever plotline.

GB

I will basically say the same thing I said on f95: Great work, man! Made me pledge 5$. So please take it slow with mom. You made her a "normal" character, that's so hot. Don't change that. Let MC have mindless sex with his GF (they will break up in the end, but she is not THAT bad), hot forbidden and lewd sex with his aunt and the maid and let him slowly start a romance with Karen. We all have seen rushed relationships so in games and visual novels so many times. Let this one be different. From what I have seen I am convinced you can do that! Oh, and I don't think I'm gonna keep pledging 5$ just to read these posts. You wouldn't reconcider, would you?

Fuuuugnmann

I like the accidental stuff, it's more erotic. The part with the maid was low key excellent. I'd like to see something along those lines happen with Karen. Maybe a scene where the MC forgot to do some laundry upon arrival and has to wear an older, smaller pair of underwear that Karen left in his dresser that doesn't contain it all, and he hangs out the bottom a bit? lol just a detailed thought I guess. So to some up, I'd like to see more accidental awareness and erotic buildup.

Bambin

I want to see her cheating, but first I wanna fuck her :D

Iceman

I agree!

Absolutely loved the update! So here's a crazy idea - girlfriend dies in a horrible accident and we live in happy depravity with mom and aunt. Just promise to at least think about it :D

Jougen