Valentine's Short NTR Game!

Thanks for your comment as always! That's really helpful. I see it seems the NTR feeling with the homeless guy was a bit lighter than that one on December. But don't worry! I can say, there are only honest guys with their desires except the boyfriend in the NTR game I'm working on! Please don't hesitate to give me your opinions also for the alpha version coming in March. Honest opinions are really helpful for me. Because I can make higher quality products with them. Thank you again!

Since you allowed me give you my opinions to make your games better, I’ll do just that. Keep in mind that I respect your work very much. This is just my sincere critic in order for you to keep getting better and better. I hope this can be useful to you. Here we go: This game was Ok, but not nearly as good as the one from Christmas. And I think there are a few reasons for that. So first I’ll talk about what I didn’t like: 1. The Homeless guy was too reluctant and that kind of killed the NTR feeling of the game. I think the sense of possession is important in NTR. So a good villain would be someone that wants to possess the heroine’s body or heart to some degree. He doesn’t have to snatch her from the boyfriend/husband, but he definitely wants to conquer her (at least conquer her body). That feeling of conquest is not present in this mini-game because the Homeless guy is too reluctant to have sex or enjoy the sex with Ruriko, and that made the NTR feel weak. 2. I didn't like the music in the sex scenes. I really liked the music from the Christmas mini-game (the one used in the sex scenes). The contrast between a calm music when Ryou is in his room and the wild music used in the sex scenes, set the mood really well. In this Valentine’s mini-game you used some kind of sexy music for the sex scenes, but as a result the contrast was lost. I think the music used in the Christmas game (the wild one used in the sex scenes with Bob) matchs the game perfectly, and manage to highlight Ruriko’s slutty nature. I hope you use it more often in the other NTR games you are making. Things that I liked: 1. I like the chocolate blowjob. The idea was really good! But the fact that the Homeless guy was so reluctant kind of killed the mood. 2. The stealth sex scene was pretty good too, but again, the part when the Homeless guy tried to stop was a mood killer. I think a good NTR villain (like Bob or the priest) would fuck and dominate Ruriko without caring if the boyfriend is there or not. 3. The art was amazing as usual. I love the voluptuosity of the girls you draw and the ahegaoアヘ顔 you make. Maybe it’s unfair to compare this mini-game with the one from December, since the Christmas mini-game was excellent. It’s hard to surpass that condom-shop scene. Maybe if we had Ryou watch how Ruriko blowjob his homemade chocolate from another man’s cock, then it could have being closer to the strong NTR feeling that the Christmass mini-game had. However Ryou watching the scene would mean he finding out that Ruriko is actually a slut. I actually would like for him to discover, so we can have more scenes like the condom-shop scene from Christmas. I think it could work if Ryou decides to forgive Ruriko every time she cheats on him, Ruriko will promise that it won’t happen again, only to cheat again and being forgiven again and promising that it won’t happen again, repeating this process over and over. Also there could be a mechanic in which Ryou could discover or not discover the cheating depending on his actions (decision/exploring/etc.). There could be stealth sex too if Ryou is willing not to discover what’s happening, even though is obvious: For instance Ruriko being fucked behind a curtain. Ryou, could pull the curtain or not (player’s decision). Even though it’s obvious what’s happening, as long as he doesn’t pull the curtain he can deceive himself into thinking that it’s not actually happening (like not wanting to know the truth). Stuff like that would be great. Sorry for the long post. I just wanted to share my thoughts. If this can be useful to you in some way, then I’m glad. I love your works, and I’ll keep supporting you!

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