After Cell game!
Added 2020-05-01 11:45:55 +0000 UTC
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Thank you ^^
SAIYAN SLAVE
2020-05-31 01:23:48 +0000 UTCWould love for her give him a bomb of her own. A big juicy gaseous bomb right in his mouth! Great photo!!
yourseatcushion
2020-05-30 22:39:47 +0000 UTCNot at the moment but there will be more :)
SAIYAN SLAVE
2020-05-06 19:38:19 +0000 UTCNo worries about you correcting me, on the contrary :) I just wanted to be sure that the dialog needed changes!
SAIYAN SLAVE
2020-05-06 19:37:43 +0000 UTCMore Goku x Kefla planned?
Mineiro Gótico .
2020-05-04 00:03:58 +0000 UTCWell as I said, those are just little nitpicks, they aren't to important and mainly just reflect clarification. I was kinda just under the impression that you didn't mind me picking up on those little errors. If you don't want me to correct ya then well I will leave it be.
Carrotop12
2020-05-03 00:18:20 +0000 UTCI'd like you to paint android 18 in this outfit to defame the vegeta. be my wish
성훈 장
2020-05-03 00:13:11 +0000 UTCPerhaps the dialog does not necessarily require modifications, but I prefer to trust you!
SAIYAN SLAVE
2020-05-02 12:36:37 +0000 UTCWell we do know the context but the phrase "Thank you for the bomb" does kinda sound like shes thanking Krillin for a bomb? It just sounds a bit vague as it were. So like say "Thanks for getting rid of my bomb" would suggest Krillin did indeed get rid of her bomb. As for "I agree to live come and live here with you" does work but it is a fragmented sentence. "I agree to live here with you.. Since I've nowhere to go.." more or less flows better and yes you can abbreviate I have to I've. ^^
Carrotop12
2020-05-02 06:33:50 +0000 UTCAre you sure the dialog requires changes here? I think "Thank you for the bomb" lets you quickly understand that she is talking about the bomb that he removed from his body thanks to the dragon balls, or that he may have saved her from a bomb for those who haven't read the manga. "I agree to come and live here with you", this sentence does not work? However, it seems to me well suited.
SAIYAN SLAVE
2020-05-02 03:06:59 +0000 UTCThank you very much :) For Vegeta and A18, just be a little patient ;)
SAIYAN SLAVE
2020-05-02 02:56:52 +0000 UTCNot at the moment :/
SAIYAN SLAVE
2020-05-02 02:55:49 +0000 UTCI knew 18 was coming back and although I don't really care for her, the pose is nice. As a suggestion have you thought of ever doing a facesitting pic of where the girl is sitting full weight with her legs outstretched on the subs body? As for the grammar check well I will say we know 18 is referring to the bomb Krillin removed for 18 but the statement sounds like shes thanking him for giving her a bomb? Perhaps something like "Thanks for removing my bomb .." The second sentence is a bit fragmented so maybe something like I'll come live with you here." Rest is all good though. ^^ I do hope you don't mind me picking at your wording but I figured if you are going for English, learning these things always helps.
Carrotop12
2020-05-01 22:02:59 +0000 UTCAlways delivering the goods I see! Hopefully Prince Vegeta will get dominated by 18 again soon, I just love this pairing for femdom! Or maybe someone else? Caulifla, Kefla, Chichi...
Tai
2020-05-01 19:33:27 +0000 UTCAny Bulla foot worship planned?
Whis Sama
2020-05-01 18:38:18 +0000 UTCThat’s my favorite android 18 outfit
Rodney warnock
2020-05-01 12:56:35 +0000 UTCYes I love 18
Tommy Pasta
2020-05-01 12:41:17 +0000 UTC
