Myth//OS - Chapter 68
Added 2026-02-06 06:32:35 +0000 UTCComments
I think Francis is like, my second favorite character. The greeting gets me every time
TheShadowSlayer_
2026-03-06 02:08:22 +0000 UTCActually what I had it as originally, but Bastion’s equal opportunity. I think I’ll swap back, though. It does feel a bit clunky.
Lost Rain
2026-02-06 07:01:03 +0000 UTCIt does feel like things are picking up. "Sir Zortro, the Knight of Knight!" -> "Knight of Night", based on the other time the name was mentioned here. "And when we are men and women are raped and disappear into labor programs" -> needs some rewording. "when our women are raped and men disappear into labor programs"?
Arkus86
2026-02-06 06:59:41 +0000 UTCThanks))
kreiverin
2026-02-06 06:49:45 +0000 UTC
