Eli vore Game
Added 2020-10-09 10:25:11 +0000 UTC消化されたものが胃の奥へ送られる描写もつけてみました エロいですよね…
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For example the translation of 助けて to "saved" might be better as "spare" in this circumstance. Or when talking about her stomach it's more of a rhetorical question than a statement because of the use of かも ending so I would have put "maybe" in front of that sentence.
2020-10-23 05:11:24 +0000 UTCjust out of personal curiosity, what's off with it?
SRG
2020-10-17 05:33:36 +0000 UTCNice work, though I think something might be off about the english translation. I can provide specific examples if you'd like.
2020-10-14 04:10:02 +0000 UTC非常好～就是这样有内部描写的丸吞消化系简直太赞了～希望逐渐有更多的细节被作者绘出～
奶子就是正义
2020-10-11 17:11:55 +0000 UTCありがとうございます！ 僕も大好きなシチュエーションの一つです。 また別のキャラで描くので楽しみにしていてくださいー！
くりっぷ
2020-10-10 00:57:09 +0000 UTCシコリティが半端ない 大満足
HydroKirby
2020-10-09 23:37:25 +0000 UTC
