Minor change in "The Belle Tolls: Chapter 7"
Added 2022-03-23 18:55:10 +0000 UTCMINOR SPOILERS! Please just ignore this if you haven't read chapter 7 yet since you will be reading the new version anyway.
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Okay, now that we're alone... I decided to change the framing around Belle's liking of doggy style. Previously, I wrote that she never once liked it because she finds it demeaning to women. The intent was to show more of Belle's hypocrisy. IE: she's morally dubious and picks suface-level social issues to act upset over despite the fact she's not the best person. "Doggy style is demeaning, but I'll strut around the market and act like a thot for clicks"
I changed it so Belle isn't opposed to doggy style, it's simply something she enjoys when she's a little intoxicated or otherwise "loosened up". So, rather than doggy style seeming like an odd choice due to Belle outright hating it, it's simply odd since it's not like Belle to jump right into doggy style like this. Something like "Woah! She hasn't even had a beer and she's presenting herself to be fucked like that?" if that makes sense.
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