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Boy, this cut & grad technique a bit more labour intensive. I'm not the best at it, but as long as I'm feeling improvement. Check out the download attachments bellow for the gagg variants. But I know tape will always be my fave.

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Mathematically, I'd estimate 21 weeks.

Hey Telikor loving your work and hungry for more. Though just curious what is you’re expected timeline of finishing this comic

Al-Azizul Hakim

I’ve had a scan through the other pages leading up to this page. The page where Jess is looped by Hangman’s rope and pulled up off her feet reminds me of the chain scene in Hellraiser 3 just before Terry Farrell is harness gagged

I keep coming back to this page and every time I do it gets better. What absolutely brilliant artwork, from the drawing to the colour. Awesome stuff…. Is the next page going to be Jess struggling whilst she waits for Hangman to return or do we see him taking out the robbers? I’d rather that be a suggestion and we focus on Jess hanging there, struggling with internal monologue with her questioning why are the ropes so tight, why can’t she break free… Mmmmphing away

This current script has blown up to like 32 pages or something.

That is the plan T_T

Soooo goddam good. And the variants…what crazy heaven is this??? We’re not worthy. I realize it’s just a variant but the notion that hangman packed a ball gag for Jess is pretty scorching hot. OTMB is a close runner up, reminds me of old comic books gags, more than the tape, somehow. Anyway, nothing about this is less than wonderful and I can’t believe there’s more ahead.

I think she mentioned in the previous post that the pages would all have variants, but the default for now is the black tape.

I could go on and on but in conclusion I'll say you great at the slow burn stories and when you deliver long awaited scenes like these YOU DELIVER, also tape is also my favorite type of gag as well, here's to many more pages of Jessica Drew bound and gagged.

If I had a wishlist for future chapters besides the failed escape attempts and wearing other outfits, I hope we get in Jessica's head showing how she deals with her new life as the Hangman's prisoner, also I wouldn't mind failed rescue attempts by other Marvel heroes/heroines maybe a heroine could join Jess in captivity ;0

I look forward to how the Hangman keeps Jessica as his captive I wouldn't mind seeing a few failed escape attempts on her part as i hope she remains a feisty damsel I bet if you translated her gagtalk it would be quite salty...

Now begins the part of the story I am most looking forward to, the part that is usually skipped over, the captivity itself, I think what will make this a classis like what made the original a classic is Jessica is not some little "help me superheroman" damsel she is a strong confident female and she is one from when that was a character trait not a marketing tool :D and to see her brought low makes the story more satisfying and dare I say sexy...

I wonder how long you intend this to be hopefully quite long ;)

Oh wow! soo much to say here, I love the flow of Jessica's character, she started out as the confident asskicker she is, then the shock of the capture, as you wrote in the script, she said what the hell is going on, the the fear of finding out her captor is the Hangman then seemingly giving up then she finds her voice only for it to be taken away, I have many more thoughts so I'm gonna continue this in another post....

It was most definitely worth the wait, though I hope you don't have to draw every page moving forward several times just so you can keep going forward with all those gags XD

Bluejazzysongbird

Looks Amazing! That gagging panel is spectacular!🌟

Very much worth waiting for... The tape gag looks great.. .OTMB is a close second and OTN would work well for a more perilous gagging if it were airproof (Heroine abandoned but escapes obviously) You are certainly very generous with the alternates -thank you :)

Devduck01

They're all so good, love them all!

Amaniwolf

This a fantastic page. It's everything we have been waiting for, and we can only thank you for this! All of the variants look incredible, but I am partial to the cleave and ball gag variants! Hopefully, Hangman will switch up the gags while Jessica is his captive!

destroxxiv

YOOOOOOOOOOOO! Perfect Telk! XD

Ronin

I know some comics release variant covers. However, I think this is the best kind of variation there is. I wonder how does this go from here? Do you keep making 6 variants of each new page from here on out? Eventually she's left tied without a gag? You stick with one gag?

A fan

Great page and variants, are we voting on gag or does the rest of the story involve the tape for now? I’m happy with the tape, looks great and nicely applied

I love this! Thanks for adding the OTN!

BombasticBagman

Ballgag will always be the fav, but with your style I think tape looks better. Great page, can't hardly wait for the next.

DaMar

Cleave and ball are my favs. Wonderful colours and design again.

Tom

Finally!! again damsel!!

Very nicely done. Perhaps Microfoam with some breathplay ...

tcltojsp

A surprise, to be sure, but a welcome one. Glad to see Jess found her voice, at last... even if only to be silenced. You did wonderfully with the variants, but the tape is my favorite, I think. The colors and shades of the page look just as good as the previous, as well.


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