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Looking at Dave Stewart's colouring work on Tim Sale's art is a good reminder that not everything needs to be rendered, especially in dark scene with lots of black fill like this.
It's weird. Sale's art is the kind I'd have historically turned my nose up at. Like "For real? This guy is considered one of the greats? Why? Everything's so rough! The colours are so flat!"
And for sure there is the odd page where I feel like "Okay... that clearly needed a little more work" but maybe as I've gotten older I've come to appreciate more the composition. Story-boarding and guiding the eye to the right details, etc.
If anything I think I've relaxed a bit when colouring and not stressed about picking exactly the right tone for this or that highlight or shadow.
So it might come out looking a little more abstract, what's the drama?

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Just a thought: might be nice for those thugs to see her getting tied up after having their butts kicked. That way, everyone wins (sort of).

I can neither confirm nor deny that yes in fact your are exactly correct.

I expect our boy's appearance three pages from now. Page 13 so. Some ass kicking from our heroine before will look good

Wonderverse

I do think it would be funny if she shouts "who are you?!" this time too, as in she doesn't remember him at all. Given how much of a failure our boy was feeling at the beginning, I'm sure it would hit some nerves

Wonderverse

Totally agree with you here

Wonderverse

VERY NICE coloring and overall organization. Feels like a professional comic book. I'm going to be saying that a lot here. :D

Ronin

In the original series when Hangman, SW shouted “who are you?!” This occasion when he appears, she’s likely to be in more of a shock!!

How convenient. Thugs arrive, so she can have some fun and get some light exercise. Then Hangman can grab her and use their van for the getaway!

Lathiira

I know it is pretty standard for superhoes to do this, but still, BTAS intro vibes

Bluejazzysongbird

Pussy in the Air ...

tcltojsp

Great job on this.

Amaniwolf

I am going to enjoy the next few pages, watching Spider-Woman kick ass! I like to see the heroines demonstrate their talents. For one thing, it justifies the sense of confidence, or even over confidence, they have in their skills...which usually gets them into trouble later ;)

Devduck01

The classic Marvel Miscellaneous Squad of Heavily Armed Goons.

Patrick Conner

Loving this page, the teasing comment from SW, the thing she doesn’t realise is, after thwarting these criminals, she’s going to be in a whole lotta bondage peril! Bring on the Hangman

Her push in the air like she really don't care. Now whoop her ass hangman ...

tcltojsp

I think you did a good job with this page, for something you’re not used to. Can’t wait to see what it looks like when she gets to beating them up.


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