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Reworking previous chapters


Hi y'all!

I've been seeing many mistakes in my past snafu chapters and lack of details in certain parts as well.

So just like I've don't before, I'll be dedicating this week to rework some old chapters again and improve the general story. The plot so far won't change, but the chapters will be easier to read.

1st mistake I've noticed is [Maledbolg Vritra Promotion] is a variant name Saji got with the devil pieces, so it doesn't make sense for Hachiman to have the same transformation.

2nd (Vajra Diamond Body) doesn't ring properly. Instead, I'll replace it with [Vajra Sacred Physique]

3rd The fighting scene with Sétante lacks detail, I'll be adding more to the battle and better the flow of the events.

4th Any other mistakes y'all have noticed so far, be sure to let me know either here or on Discord.

Speaking of discord, if you want to discuss some other things about the story the don't hesitate to ask, I'll answer your questions ASAP.

That's all, I'm going to sleep.


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