Update 5th April 2022
Added 2022-04-05 17:06:50 +0000 UTC.
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Aight, so me and my beta readers have reworked chapter 16: First request. A LOT has been added and changed.
So I can say with confidence that the chapter ain't as shitty as before.
You can give it a read and tell me your thoughts on it.
