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SoS p4 HD

Page 4!

Things going very wrong very fast at this installation!

I was worried -too- fast, but this is, after all, a brief intro chapter. I didn't want to drag on or take forever to get to the actual characters everyone knows, but in hindsight, i think this was a good open. I hope.

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Comments

"Flight Controls. Flight Controls."

HazraPanda

OUCH! Looks like a future lawsuit about to happen here >_<

Diamondstorm

Wouldn't that just rain chunks of ship and explosive material down on the tower?

Reiver93

Having GPWS on spaceships has me _rolling_. "Please see manual" was an excellent touch as well! Love it.

Turaiel Rylis

Kaboom? Yes Rico. Kaboom.

idfailure

I love the multiple screen splits and dialogues on panel 1 as it perfectly encapsulates hoe chaotic and dire the situation is. I also love how detailed the armor and the ship look in the second panel and how it’s full of dialogue. Really sells how dangerous this situation is becoming at this instant.

MC

Love the effects you did on the top panel to emphasise the tension! Also like how you got a lot of dialogue imitating how alerts and people would be shouting over one another in this sort of situation

Blobage

That would be time to commit point defense.

Komitadjie

Wow. This page is intense! All the effects, dialogue and details put into this are fantastic!

Antoine Davis

Ooh Ugly times are a coming for them. Looking forward to where this goes forward, for now STRONG start

RoadAegis


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