Predators of Denali - Page 59
Added 2021-09-14 11:48:56 +0000 UTCPage 59!
If you remember, there's a plot! Yes, really! Still more action, but I think I found a fun way to integrate and balance it with some also-fun story and lore. Other than the very beginning of this comic, and a page or two near Massak's meeting, there hasn't been much in the way of 'lore' per se. Meaning, things about the world not directly about the events of the comic.
For a while I struggled to write a tie-in that didnt' seem forced, somewhere in here, that has some fun with the world. It's not as developed as my sci-fi world, but I hope you're as excited to read as I am to make!
Comic so far: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/jd2qv9iu7gip5ge/AADBU8flalRw9WkxQWNJ-VtLa?dl=0
Comments
Aw shit, the plot. Well things were good while they lasted. Kidding! XD Interested to see where this goes and what the spooky rock is.
Diamondstorm
2021-09-16 03:15:25 +0000 UTCThis came out really well! You did an awesome job on the depth of field when it's focused on Tala!
YoungRiles
2021-09-15 05:50:20 +0000 UTCHOT
Daki Suggester
2021-09-14 22:37:37 +0000 UTCWhat? Wasn’t the plot Tala (trainee) and Bailey (trainer) were delivering a pizza? :p Joking aside, it’s been coming along just fine. Should be great once it’s completed!
idfailure
2021-09-14 20:01:38 +0000 UTCI love how Bailey is riding him to heaven and he is still able to tell her where to look.
ghostman
2021-09-14 18:51:38 +0000 UTCI absolutely love the way her legs are trembling. the effects on the last panel are amazing. Great work Fluff!
The Friendly Deathclaw
2021-09-14 18:09:24 +0000 UTCLol "it's dangerous to go alone! Take this!" *plot*
KodeTen
2021-09-14 17:33:34 +0000 UTCI love that underglow effect from the water in the pool. Very pretty page! And hey, look! Tala found the plot! XD Great work, Fluff! Glad you're having a good time with this one. Keep up the great work!
Roughlandin
2021-09-14 17:18:39 +0000 UTCThat's the best kind of sex, when you can barely walk afterwards~
Cult of Dust
2021-09-14 16:10:12 +0000 UTCHey, tribal planets in sci-fi universes are really cool, always adds a ton of narrative possibilities!
minoan
2021-09-14 13:46:54 +0000 UTCIt was an episode of The X-Files this whole time!
The14th
2021-09-14 13:39:41 +0000 UTCI'm not sure 100% what that means, but, Obviously can't do anything about it now, but i think it'll flow okay when read in one sitting.
FluffKevlar
2021-09-14 13:18:00 +0000 UTCAwesome page! I'm getting Voyager Golden Record/Arecibo message vibes from the text on the slab. Could it be that this universe and your sci-fi universe are the same?
minoan
2021-09-14 12:28:09 +0000 UTCI can't help but feel like there was some mission creep in the sex scenes, 'cus even for a porn comic we've gone a bit far between plot points. Not complaining, just saying.
The14th
2021-09-14 12:17:24 +0000 UTCI'd just like to take this moment to comment on the fact that this is page FIFTY NINE! Awesome job, Fluff! This has been a great comic from the beginning, and I'm sensing it's only half done. There hasn't been a dull moment; even the pages were very little was -happening- were fun and engaging to see and read. You've done an incredible job and I want to congratulate you. I'm eager to see what you've got planned for the rest of the comic. I wouldn't be surprised if it reached 100 pages before we realise it. ;D
Silvador
2021-09-14 12:12:10 +0000 UTCBeautiful page, i love the underglow of the water and the stone. I also like that cloudy/rough color effect panel with Tala's eye. I also love the details with the flowers, floral and plants for i wonder if they'll be explorered too. I can't wait to see this explorered/more plot to the story. But yeah, awesome job!
Antoine Davis
2021-09-14 11:56:43 +0000 UTCOh em geee this is so gorgeous!
Sabre
2021-09-14 11:50:16 +0000 UTC
