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August Pinup - Tough Love [+story] WEB/Early
Added 2020-08-28 20:54:29 +0000 UTC Hey guys! Here it is, the finished piece y'all voted on this month. A fun little in-character interaction with Nytro and Vikna.
Their relationship is a unique one in my story setting, kind of love-hate in a way... I struggled with dialog and what to include. There were really too many options and I didn't want to weigh it down. It was hard to pick what best summarized the situation. In the end, I saved out one version with no text, one with a bit, and...I uh...typed a short erotic story to go with it.
This isn't easy for me! I'm not an experienced writer. I think I'm decent at diction and vocabulary, but maybe with a history of writing porn sometimes, I could mix it up with a character-driven one...I dunno! I'm confident in my art usually, not my writing. But it was fun to do, I'll admit. It helped me form the atmosphere of the image a lot better, and I could fit much more into it than text on the picture.
If you guys enjoy it, I'd consider adding some snippets and other short write-ups to other images when possible. Hope you all enjoy both!
Comments
That is true, ill remember the pointer! Thanks man!
FluffKevlar
2020-08-31 21:56:21 +0000 UTCThank you!
FluffKevlar
2020-08-31 21:55:20 +0000 UTCWriting action in any form, be it gun ballet or groin-al collisions, is difficult. Erotic writing specifically has an added layer of challenge as it's a balancing act. Everyone wants the squelching fun but too much can land in Tolkien eye-roll territory (No Frodo, I don't want fifty pages about tree bark). You did good work on this snip. Only advice I would give is remember that you can be more vague on the mechanical nature of what's going on and delve more into the character introspection. That's the one advantage writing has over a purely visual medium. Would love to see more story to go with the pics. As for the art, hot damn, great stuff.
Chaz
2020-08-31 15:04:12 +0000 UTCO.O I love it! <3
2020-08-30 19:50:40 +0000 UTCAmazing! Only thing that would make it better is a deep creampie!
NekoNinja13
2020-08-29 14:17:11 +0000 UTCWow, that's awesome!
Futrzasty Mefju
2020-08-28 20:58:35 +0000 UTC
