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Predators of Denali - Page 45 [sketch]
Added 2020-08-07 17:01:02 +0000 UTCPage 45!
This one was a bit hard to frame and fit together, but I think it'll be alright. Hope it doesn't feel too rushed in pacing; I tried to think about having another page between here and Bailey finally being introduced/mentioned, and it felt like too much filler/ padding that didn't add much. I think it'll feel more fit-in with the 2-3 pages following this one.
Enjoy!
Comments
That "oh crap" look... lol
Blackjack
2020-08-11 15:22:12 +0000 UTCowu face
Deciem X
2020-08-10 00:26:39 +0000 UTCthanks! i liked it too
FluffKevlar
2020-08-09 02:17:09 +0000 UTCthank you! i liked em here
FluffKevlar
2020-08-09 02:16:41 +0000 UTCA new challenger appears!
Diamondstorm
2020-08-08 14:46:02 +0000 UTCI think the pacing is perfect. Bailey needs to put points toward stealth though.
ghostman
2020-08-08 00:40:47 +0000 UTCLooks great, also no it doesn't feel rushed. I do wonder what he was thinking about Bailey whenever he noticed her, also the expressions look awesome.
Antoine Davis
2020-08-07 18:49:09 +0000 UTCWhoops. Looks like she got caught. ;3
EnterTheHero
2020-08-07 17:46:26 +0000 UTCI think this is the right time to introduce Bailey, and the right way. I think a lot of the feedback that it was too early last time was due to Bailey's introduction being seen as more of an *interruption* than an addition, derailing a nice scene already in progress. Now that that scene is over there's nothing to interrupt -- we got the first scene, and now we get the promise of even more with Bailey as a true value-add rather than as an interloper. Win/win!
minoan
2020-08-07 17:33:08 +0000 UTCWonderful expressions
WUNP_FX
2020-08-07 17:28:31 +0000 UTCNo worries Tala, I bone birds all the time, a wolf is a nice change of pace! By the way there’s this bear watching us, maybe she can get in on it too.
Ahawk95
2020-08-07 17:21:07 +0000 UTCI like that cute face she makes.
Skyler_darkwolf
2020-08-07 17:20:10 +0000 UTCBusted!
Khanaar
2020-08-07 17:04:50 +0000 UTCOh he knows hes been watched, come on in!
Iselwyr
2020-08-07 17:03:26 +0000 UTCThe facial expression on tala is great
Caspian Yuichiro
2020-08-07 17:02:44 +0000 UTC
