Predators of Denali - Pages 39 and 40
Added 2020-03-22 10:00:02 +0000 UTCHey guys!
I reworked page 39. I know a lot of you were/are excited to see Bailey again, but re-reading it, and seeing how the act was interrupted for a 2nd(3rd ish?) time, I couldn't get it sitting right with me. I took to thumbnailing and re-scripting a few of the next pages in text only and with them, found a much smoother route to the goals. Bailey will emerge/insert more slowly and naturally this route, but it just feels just overall -nicer- to give some breathing room for the current act.
Enjoy some wolf digging in to sheep dick! My goal is to finish these within the end of month.
Comments
Yes, Bailey is back!
Skyler_darkwolf
2020-03-28 00:51:15 +0000 UTCEvery time I think Tala can't get any cuter you one-up yourself.
Diamondstorm
2020-03-23 23:10:28 +0000 UTCJust putting it out there that leaving Bailey out entirely is also an option.
Sakura Wulf
2020-03-23 20:45:38 +0000 UTCThe change seems to go more with the flow and can't wait to see Bailey's expression and jokes when she sees what's going on. XD
Regulos14
2020-03-22 22:27:45 +0000 UTCWow, she can take that deep. Bet her other end could handle it.
Grip
2020-03-22 18:23:56 +0000 UTCPhrasing!
Richard Awesome
2020-03-22 16:37:27 +0000 UTCThis pacing feels a lot better, yeah. No need to rush! For comparison, Sefeiren's last comic just finished at 201 pages. ;P
Volpethrope
2020-03-22 16:28:35 +0000 UTCIm really liking were this is going, although more solo time between these two would be greatly appreciated!
Skeleton Man
2020-03-22 15:47:46 +0000 UTCYeah, this feels a lot better. And tala gets some more much needed time alone with masak. Haha, Poor Bailey though, she looks exhausted. Great looking pages fluff, looking forward to these later!
Ahawk95
2020-03-22 12:24:52 +0000 UTCAmazing as always fluff, looking forward to the finished product!
Bythebook
2020-03-22 12:16:26 +0000 UTCAbout time.
Zagura
2020-03-22 11:44:22 +0000 UTCAs much as I'll miss that funny scene, this is much better. The porn is way overdue in this comics already as it is!
Kelanich Santovedis
2020-03-22 11:21:59 +0000 UTCThey both look awesome, also yeah it does feel better pacing.
Antoine Davis
2020-03-22 10:02:42 +0000 UTC
