Predators of Denali - Page 31 Sketch
Added 2019-05-30 12:00:03 +0000 UTCThis is probably one of my favourite pages. It's been quite a few pages since we've gotten Tala to relax, and with all of the Bae'li wind-up earlier that never resolved, her thoughts are complicated. She likes Massak so far, he's been kind, supportive, funny, and seemingly adverse to any act of taking advantage of her.
Of course, she's no slut, so seeing her wrestle with the idea of wanting to remain polite, modest, and cute, while having these urges, was, to me, really fun to draw/write out. Especially all this internal screaming. Everyone's had that feeling, when you panic and a thousand thoughts flood your head all at once. Her night has been all over the place, and I think it isn't too hard to believe that she's finding herself slipping between not wanting to come off too strong, but also got this voice in her head telling her to bite(in a different way).
Anyway, hope that all was readable -without- me having to explain it, I just want to know if my commentary is well-backed, sensible, and fun. Enjoy!
Comments
It was at that moment, she knew, she spoke too much. XD Tala's expression is priceless! I love it!
DarkWolfElite
2019-05-31 19:20:48 +0000 UTCBalls soft as the rest of.... lol
TryManX
2019-05-31 02:02:37 +0000 UTCFluff are you still gonna have the 1st request strim of june on Sunday or are you gonna wait til the next sunday?
The Friendly Deathclaw
2019-05-30 23:51:16 +0000 UTCJesus christ this is a meme
Anonymous Trashbag
2019-05-30 22:37:26 +0000 UTCI'm having way too much fun reading all those thoughts in the last panel XD
Diamondstorm
2019-05-30 22:12:53 +0000 UTCTala's expressions are just too adorable!! Awesome Work Fluff <3 Love it
The Friendly Deathclaw
2019-05-30 20:00:46 +0000 UTChah yea this page looks funny. The one-two punch of not getting to finish after her short session with Bailey and then drinking an aphrodisiac must be pretty intense on the urges, huh?
Deerio Jim
2019-05-30 19:34:40 +0000 UTCYes, yes she will.
Vicki M.
2019-05-30 18:22:36 +0000 UTC"Are sheep supposed to be hot." Just look at him...
Apostrophe(')
2019-05-30 17:45:44 +0000 UTCYeah, definitely must've been something in the soup, cuz that seems pretty out of character for her X3
ExtremistLine
2019-05-30 16:48:53 +0000 UTCThis just made me spit out my drink XD Looks like Tala.exe just stopped working right there.
halo6301
2019-05-30 15:40:50 +0000 UTCYou can *hear* the record-scratch SFX inside his head halfway into panel 3.
cittran genericlastname
2019-05-30 14:43:26 +0000 UTCThis is amazing, i can also imagine "How could this happen to me" playing in the background. But yeah, this page looks awesome so far.
Antoine Davis
2019-05-30 14:03:47 +0000 UTCHer face is adorable, and those racing thoughts, oh boy <3
Breef
2019-05-30 14:03:15 +0000 UTCdid she just say think daddy? lol she one of those girls who has the daddy kink
Grizzly Gus
2019-05-30 13:31:58 +0000 UTCHah! Smooth. Subtle even. x3
PhyreFox
2019-05-30 13:17:34 +0000 UTCHAHAHA! Her expression is priceless! And the mix of thoughts racing through her head is perfect. XD
Silvador
2019-05-30 13:14:31 +0000 UTCooooooooh boy this is going to be fun XD
Skeleton Man
2019-05-30 12:39:38 +0000 UTCYou got to tie in the porn scene some how.
Kenith Fox
2019-05-30 12:30:06 +0000 UTCOr i have bad screen or some words are cutting with first or last letter But whole scene and page are awesome and cute :3
Futrzasty Mefju
2019-05-30 12:07:52 +0000 UTC
