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Carmelita Fox [sketches]

The ideas for her pinup; I've drawn the lovely lady a few times in more classic pinup poses. I wanted to do something a little more candid. It was suggested a chase through the streets/city after Sly, and  after finding a few fun poses that I worked with, I kind of like both of these.

A is a little more of a side-chase, B is turning-a-corner swivel mid-action shot. I like both for different reasons, I'm curious to hear your guys' opinions. The more candid the picture, the fewer variants there are that make sense. Nude or undergarments, she could be chasing Sly because he's a panty thief? But stuff like various outfits other than her norm, and accessories, will be more of a minimum. 

Edit: some tweaks since posting these will be made, like fixing up B's face and legs a bit. Not final sketches.

Carmelita Fox [sketches] Carmelita Fox [sketches] Carmelita Fox [sketches]

Comments

I really enjoy A. I can see that being really dynamic in a number of ways in the background

Anonymous Trashbag

A looks more action packed. You really need to draw more action packed scenes.

SCPilot

A

RougeNation

I like B, it feels more natural.

Icra

I prefer the action of A

WDG

A

Aetheos

"A" takes the cake.

StormbladeF22

After giving it some thought I think I lean towards B. I like the sense of balance and dynamic energy it has.

Heresy

Love A

TryManX

Both are awesome! But I'm really drawn to the dynamism of A. The side shot does a great job showing a little of everything, and honestly that leg lift is pretty sexy.

Diamondstorm

I say B

kts2008

A looks fucking awesome. Go with that.

Mira Inhara

I like both, but if I had to choose i'd choose b

The Friendly Deathclaw

I'm leaning to B, panty-thief isn't a bad idea either.

Lashout

B

TheTinselTarts

Favorite game series as a kid. Good to see that my first boner makes sense XD

Travis smith

I prefer B, probably because it better shows her curves, thus functioning more as a pinup.

Nathan G.

They both look good I think. A makes more sense with her pose, but B would make sense if there were a background to show her going around a corner. I'm curious though if a Chase for another reason might happen, like playing on a beach sort of thing? It might be an idea if you wanted her to have a difference in emotion on her face.

Jeff Hollis

B

diddlier

I love both of them but I think I lean towards A

Kaytea Kat

A feels more dynamic, B feels more like a traditional pin up. I personally like both, but think it might be easier to do more overall with B as far as background/poses/alts go.

AviatorSoul

A

I love A

Richard Fist

B

Baelfire

B please

Logan g

I gotta go with A hehe

BlueNovember

Yeah I have to go with B

Todd Whitesel

A

BusterSlug

Owoo

BusterSlug

B

BallisticBlue

I realy like both of them but i find A more dynamic

djikoz

B is good

A for me!

Skufer

b

Stalkingweasel

I vote B. I just like the look of it, more. "Dam raccoon! Stop stealing my clothes!"

Silvador

A. Soooooooo A. B is great but the view of A...Yeah I'm a perv for pixelated wamen. I'll own up to it!

Thunderclap421

I love both of them, but if I had to choose, I would have to say A.

Kaneine

definitely A

Synariel

I like A better

Chad Zwadlo

A is better.

OmniOtter

I love A.

shadowstarthe1st

Wow these are gorgeous! <3

Heresy

I like A.

KCDodger

Would it be greedy of me to ask for both? But maybe with less variations? I'm just to torn between the two to choose.

Tevin Escobar

I think both of them are pretty great, I'm leaning slightly towards B, it's not a pose you see used often.

Commodore Cougar

That's my boat, A, but Fluff always makes great-looking pieces regardless of the pose so I'll be happy with either.

LifeWulf

Really digging option A. Feels more serious(?), where as B feels more fun/silly. Both are great for different reasons, but I'd really love to see you move forward with A. Though I'm positive either will look amazing, whichever route you decide to take the piece.

C-Fed

A. for sure A

Spartan277

Option A looks like she chasing Cooper after jewelry & her under garments. Option B looks like she chases Cooper after just after having sex with him and he on run because she wants catch him to fuck him again which leave option Carmlita dripping with his cum while chasing him. They both look really good

Robert

I like A better. The angle on B makes her legs look a little more awkward for a pinup, and is closer to being just a standing pose. A feels more dynamic and "in the moment."

Volpethrope

I totally agree.

I really like "A" alot. Its a really nice pose that stands out from the usual pinup poses and gives Carmelita more of that "oomph" factor compared to "B".

I like the dynamic action in A. The other one looks a bit too dainty for the merciless manhunter.

firandor

always good to see some Carmelita :3

Gorehound

I'm gonna go against the grain here and say A. I like the more actiony focus dynamic of the pose.

Electricfox777

B for me as well.

Domino

I vote B.

Gonna say B. looks more convincing? Like, the running naked in A kinda looks goofy.

Kaizer

It's a really tough choice, they both show such great angles and dynamics. I think I lean more towards A. I think it could show more action.

Darkhom

They're both purdy, but i think B is a nice full-body pose.

Roy Keagan

I thought I liked B more initially, but I thought about it. Now I think A is better because it is a little bit different than what is typically done as a pinup, and would ultimately be more interesting imo.

wolftar

I like B

Antoine Davis

I think picture B would be good, maybe running out of a dimly lit sauna/hot springs chasing Sly


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