Predators of Denali - Page 22 Sketch
Added 2018-09-14 03:55:57 +0000 UTCTala is off! Where? Why? I don't know. Neither does Bailey. I hope the big, broad landscape composition of the bottom frames comes off okay. It should read as "a decent amount of time passing". Remember, still 'new' at comics here. I tried to do some research a bit ago about panel layouts and size/spacing.
This is a point of shift for the comic at least for a decent number of pages, and the overall focus. Fingers crossed that it's fun for everyone else as it is for me/what I have written/doodled out/in mind!
Comments
I laughed pretty good at that. ROLL CREDITS
FluffKevlar
2018-09-15 02:10:41 +0000 UTCHype to see where this is going honestly
Anonymous Trashbag
2018-09-14 18:13:16 +0000 UTCAnd Tala was never seen again. The end.
NitroToxico
2018-09-14 16:19:44 +0000 UTCWell, that's what i call getting off.
Synariel
2018-09-14 11:24:58 +0000 UTCAh, true! May try that as well and see how it looks.
FluffKevlar
2018-09-14 07:34:04 +0000 UTCThere's going to be lots of jokes!
FluffKevlar
2018-09-14 07:33:41 +0000 UTCShe's definitely confused, haha. Chasing after Tala is gonna take a bit!
FluffKevlar
2018-09-14 07:33:33 +0000 UTCHm, maybe have a page-wide thin panel of the sky in between the landscape and upper panels, to help show the passing of time? like when movies decides to pan up to the sky, then down again in another location to indicate a scene shift?
Deerio Jim
2018-09-14 06:47:35 +0000 UTCTala goin to get "Rammed" in a dang hurry.
Heretic Morgan
2018-09-14 05:59:46 +0000 UTCPoor, lonely Bailey. I wonder if she finished herself off since Tala "Evac'd" out of there. :P
Silvador
2018-09-14 05:59:02 +0000 UTCGonna get Bailey withdrawals.
Richard Awesome
2018-09-14 04:12:49 +0000 UTCSHES OVER 9000!!!!
RougeNation
2018-09-14 04:02:11 +0000 UTCThis looks awesome so far! Also, landscape looks pretty good. Also yeah it does seem like time has passed. But yeah, can't wait to see what happens. Also, what were the two cameo wolves names?
Antoine Davis
2018-09-14 03:56:34 +0000 UTC
