Predators of Denali - Page 21 HD
Added 2018-08-31 04:43:40 +0000 UTCPage 21! Tala seems entranced by the Aurorae, and feels an effect coming over her, that apparently is enough to motivate a sudden departure and change of character. Bailey is confused~
I don't know why I struggled to like, and finish, this page. I think part of me worries I've interrupted or cut short the sexy parts for some story stuff that isn't explained yet, so perhaps feels odd or forced right now? I've sketched(very, very loosely) many pages in advance, so I'm fairly confident in the story's pacing and overall feel when read all at once, but it's also impossible to go -back- to previous pages and change too much if it -doesn't- seem to work. Maybe i'm over-thinking it. Or still learning about sequential storytelling in this form. Fingers crossed I guess!
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Comments
This is unexpected.
Chamomile Sheep
2018-09-06 00:37:45 +0000 UTCYeh! Fun to see the differences!
FluffKevlar
2018-09-02 02:12:58 +0000 UTCBleppy bear in color OwO
Skellitor301
2018-09-01 09:31:55 +0000 UTCInteresting. Quite a lot of development between the sketch and the finished page! Noticed the 'pine' panel in particular basically went through a whole different thing.
Not Telling
2018-09-01 07:09:24 +0000 UTCThe Tala signal my city needs me!!!
TryManX
2018-09-01 02:02:30 +0000 UTCLol, Bailey's face is like: But... we were having such a good time" Really curious though what's gotten into Tala. Maybe the mountain magic is making her go feral? Or she just realized she really wants some salmon!
Diamondstorm
2018-08-31 22:30:01 +0000 UTCGuess thats one way to make somone go hunting.
NitroToxico
2018-08-31 13:33:56 +0000 UTCShe powered up.
2018-08-31 12:55:03 +0000 UTCI think the pacing and everything is fine. And that last frame is excellent, haha.
Hazelnut
2018-08-31 11:57:54 +0000 UTCI'm Loving <3 this Comic so much Fluff!!
The Friendly Deathclaw
2018-08-31 07:38:05 +0000 UTCFuck sex and a powerful orgasm, FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISH!!!!!!! Additionally, you're over thinking it. We've had some really great sexiness, with Bailey under the table at the meeting, and Bailey in the water, and then Bailey under Tala (Bailey seems to like being under things in this, doesn't she. XD). Plus, this is entirely fantastic and you've captured the expression of Bailey's surprise and Tala's shift in... focus(?) spectacularly. As someone who loves to both hear and tell stories, I strongly recommend you do one thing if you do nothing else, tell the story the way -you- want it to be told. As random and unorthodox as this turn of events is, you've made it clear, not just by telling us in the description, but in your presentation of the upper panels, that there is a reason for this happening and we will probably get an explanation soon. Don't ever compromise on your story. It is your world, your characters, and your tale to be told. Never, ever let anyone else, in any way, dictate the direction your story takes or the method you use to tell it. We're already hear to hear it, you don't need to worry about losing us. We're hear to hear your story, not our own. If you overthink things too much you risk making them flat and calculated, programmed, even, without flare or personality. You've already had a couple of fantastic successes with your comics, there's no need to fret about if you're doing things wrong or right. You do you and we'll just sit here and enjoy it. Don't be afraid to experiment a little, if you feel you want to. You're not going to scare us off just by making something not everyone likes.
Silvador
2018-08-31 05:47:50 +0000 UTCYou always include bous page that is between this page and previous comic page.
Robert
2018-08-31 05:27:57 +0000 UTCI love how she just leaves Bailey (Bae’li) there. I will say that I really didn’t see this coming out of Tala... at least, not while being eaten out.
Tevin Escobar
2018-08-31 04:52:47 +0000 UTCThis is awesome, like i love that there's more story to this comic. But yeah, this is really good, and that its okay about the sexual scenes. But yeah, see you in the next page.
Antoine Davis
2018-08-31 04:48:49 +0000 UTCMore like finger fuck... man, I need better jokes. Any way, I like a good bit of story over lesbian porn, but that is just me.
Kenith Fox
2018-08-31 04:48:37 +0000 UTCLooks great, just keep doing what you're doing, it turns out great even after all your worries.
Avaricious
2018-08-31 04:47:48 +0000 UTC
