Predators of Denali Page 19 - Sketch

Thanks! I’m starting to feel happier about it too, I think.

FluffKevlar

I hope so too! :O

FluffKevlar

That’d be unexpected in the very least

FluffKevlar

Thank you, i really appreciate it.

Antoine Davis

Haha, thanks! Glad it’s looking out okay.

FluffKevlar

Good point with the younger dipping in, yeah. As for the outfit, I did kind of like the idea of it all happening with it on, and her losing it shortly after for different reasons. I guess to remind people of loincloth ‘easy access’ and all that. Bailey will also get her fingers in there, might include on the sketch down in the corner a bit.

FluffKevlar

Thanks,and happy birthday!

FluffKevlar

The one detail I think you should consider tweaking here would be to have the second close-up shot show Bailey's tongue dipping back into Tala on its way down. With how worked up she should be at this point, I'd think her pussy would be pretty relaxed from that thick tongue exploring it so much. Sort of show that it can just easily slide back in without much resistance I guess. And from what I've heard from actual women, stimulation to the vulva can feel nice, but it's really not much compared to clitoral or internal stimulation. Having her lips pushed around isn't gonna make her pop, basically. ;D The only other thing I might suggest would be to have Tala start pulling her outfit (I have no idea what to call this specific item of clothing lol) off. They're in a hot spring and she's getting enthusiastically eaten out for the first time - I think she'd be pretty hot at this point and clothes might feel uncomfortable. Unless you're planning on her losing it on the next page or whatever anyway, so we can have some lovely afterglow conversation with the uptight wolf now super relaxed.

Volpethrope

Oof

Jamez115

Melm~

Thunderclap421

You know those times when words just won't suffice to describe how much you FUCKING LOVE something??? Yeah. This is one of those times. These last few pages have all been one of those times. Fan-freaking-tastic work, Fluff. Just phenomenal! :D

Silvador

Those are some interesting wrestling techniques there. Does Massak come in with a luchador mask, leap in, and slam his dick into Bailey's pussy to RKO it? I don't know how I thought of this, but I did.

Kenith Fox

Fuck, i love those tongue licking panels where Bailey licks her pussy up and down. So fucking hot. :O I hope to see a nice climax scene from Tala soon.

This looks great, also this is on my birthday. But yeah, its looks good so far, i wonder where it'll go from here.

Antoine Davis

You mentioned before that you don't often do F/F stuff, but you've done a pretty fantastic job with this sequence so far! Can't wait to see where you take this scene next!

C-Fed