Predators of Denali - Page 11 Sketch
Added 2018-01-03 13:05:54 +0000 UTCPage 11! Tala goes through her ritual, while Bailey off to the side makes a sudden realization. Her grandma is there, off to provide a little bit of knowledge to the bear about her journey, more on page 12, describing her special mission to look for signs of magic or unusual activities. Threw in a first draft of the dialogue for this page, sorry if hard to read at the moment. Enjoy!
I want to finalize this page this week so I can keep the story moving. My constant hope is that my comics can still be fun and engaging even before porn happens, since I'm kinda still stretching my legs with 'em, and think they should really be the most 'lasting' thing this Patreon can create. Let me know what you think as I go!
Comments
Tala is so cute
UmberFox
2018-01-06 02:35:27 +0000 UTCHm, not sure if it's just me but I get this rather uneasy feeling from this whole ceremony due to Kiga leading it that I'm not sure is intended. He's acting here in a significant capacity that seems odd so soon after being actively shitty to Tala. Maybe this will all fit better once we see the rest of the ceremony and the aftermath. EDIT: Accidentally some words. Darn autocorrect!
Bionet
2018-01-05 15:41:55 +0000 UTCI wasn't originally a fan of Bailey's design, but she's been super cute in this comic.
Spartan277
2018-01-04 03:36:32 +0000 UTCi totally heard Bae'li go <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ApIqyoGUMdM" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ApIqyoGUMdM</a>
SwiftKitten
2018-01-04 01:32:00 +0000 UTCHAHA! Her face! XD
Silvador
2018-01-03 23:51:31 +0000 UTCCan we take a moment to appreciate how cute Bailey's grandma is
Blue-Eyed Feline
2018-01-03 19:31:00 +0000 UTCLet's play Minecraft sometime
Blue-Eyed Feline
2018-01-03 19:27:32 +0000 UTCHey I like nudity and all, but I think clothes often make a figure even more sexy. Seriously take your time with the porn. I love world building.
Evangellos
2018-01-03 19:13:00 +0000 UTCSo far this looks great, also yes there should be more story in this. I mean there's so much to this comic, in which the story and characters need to be the main focus like they're, now. But still this ia awesome.
Antoine Davis
2018-01-03 14:33:48 +0000 UTCWell, it is! Since not many comics will be 100% porn all the time, I want the build-up to be good too and not just trudging through it
FluffKevlar
2018-01-03 13:30:34 +0000 UTCI'm a sucker for a good story with some pr0ns sprinkled in as well, and this is turning out really well. =P And to be honest, the more story, the better. There are so many "just porn comics" out there that barely have any story in them. There needs to be more furry comics that have more story to them than porn I feel. Just my opinion of course. :)
Kitsunelegend
2018-01-03 13:20:17 +0000 UTCQuote: My constant hope is that my comics can still be fun and engaging even before porn happens. It gives a healthy dose of immersion and is a significant step up from the all too common here are n members of species x having sex. A nice example of this was recently completed by Zummeng about a lizard and Djinni. Lovely conclusion at the end which didn't entirely revolve around sex.
Fuzzwood
2018-01-03 13:17:25 +0000 UTC
