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Added 2023-09-22 13:32:24 +0000 UTCUh, guys? Are you not liking the new fic? If not, then why so that I could improve it...
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I see... Understandable...
2023-09-23 18:30:45 +0000 UTCIt's too early to tell you are still establishing the characters.
TheRavenbrand
2023-09-23 12:21:26 +0000 UTCIn Kumo I would personally prefer a story that builds on Mabui's Heavenly Transfer Technique with something like "Light Release".
Kurozake
2023-09-23 04:14:52 +0000 UTCAn mc who just has an extreme lightning affinity doesn't sound overly interesting to me. In my head I kind of picture a Sasuke without Sharingan but with the Raikage's Cloak of Lightning.
Kurozake
2023-09-23 04:12:01 +0000 UTC
