Sinner 2.0
Added 2023-10-05 21:30:32 +0000 UTCHey, my Deers! Big thanks to everyone who is still here! <3
I hope I can give you a longer health update and plans for my situation at a later point. I'm not fully back yet, but I'm working on some things in the background.
Now I wanted to show my decision to change some parts of the latest scenes. Some of you might have heard about it already because I posted the long explanation which is also attached as a PDF below to Tapas and Webtoon a while ago. If you want to know the details, you can grab it and read it, but the super short version is: I was uncomfortable with how the storyline developed and wanted to omit the "Scott TAKES a polaroid" scene from the plot. At first, I forgot to inform you here as well. But then I thought it would be better to wait so I could upload the explanation together with the first rework, so you get the announcement together with the execution. And then you can immediately see, how I now solved the issue I had. As I tried to reuse as much art as I already had finished, the paneling and body language flow is not perfect, but it was a good compromise for me. But I also drew some new art and a small new flashback snippet, to keep the same page count, so it's worth a re-read!
You can now find the new version of the finale pages of TAPE 6 -Sinner!! above and on the Server (replacing the other version). But for you patrons, I will also leave the "DELETED SCENES" up as an archive on the Server
(Sinner 1.0 is the more 18+ first draft, with some sexual panels, 1.5 is the version that was in the book and went online with some additional censoring)
Reworks of TAPE 7 - Problem!! (that obviously needs to fit to the changes I made in chapter 6) will follow as soon as I get to them.
I hope you can vibe with this announcement, TAKE CARE everyone, see YAA later!
*runs away again*
Comments
Wow I wish I'd read the PDF letter sooner, you've really been through it. I'm sorry you've been having a rough time. I really appreciate the change; I was willing to see where you took it, but clicking that shutter button felt like a pretty serious line for Scott to cross. The spying was absolutely not cool, but making a permanent record is a big step further. Still, please don't beat yourself up over changing this. It's hard to be your own editor. I'm pretty sure most company-supported commercial works have editors pore over the script, and sensitivity readers to bring up things like this, and that's a luxury I don't think you have at your disposal. Honestly, I think it's pretty fucking brave to say that you miscalculated, and had to go back and fix something. You should count it as a strength. I'm looking forward to what's next!
marcus erronius
2023-10-09 16:30:48 +0000 UTCI 100% support the change. I enjoy seeing more of Scott's internal conflict that also takes into account Carter's boundaries.
Raskolnikov
2023-10-09 01:49:58 +0000 UTCYeah, I mean I’m a weirdo who loves a scummy redemption arc lol but the rework fits (the idea I have of) Scott’s character better- he can be toxic and problematic but I always read it as internalized homophobia and self-hate as opposed to maliciously hurting others. And the story still leaves plenty of room to explore toxic/unhealthy dynamics and eventual character growth/redemption, if that’s the way you want to go. There’s nothing wrong with changing your mind :)
AnonymousQ
2023-10-07 19:38:59 +0000 UTCGod this series keeps throwing me around on this emotional rollercoaster everytime I read it without fail. It's like an addiction it makes me feel horrible but I can't turn away.
Cazitron
2023-10-07 04:08:12 +0000 UTCpersonally, i’m so happy you changed it!!! i loved scott’s character so much and the polaroid thing threw me off so hard, especially considering that it seems like you plan on him getting with crush at some point. regardless of the reader’s opinions tho, it’s your story and if you didn’t like the direction it took i’m really glad you went and changed it. :) unrelated, but i need to take a break from my subscription rn cuz i’m broke asf. if u see this, i just want u to know that if ur subs are dropping bc of ur hiatus, i will be coming back !! gl with all your personal shit and try ur best not to be too hard on urself for needing some time <3
cherry
2023-10-06 07:24:28 +0000 UTCI think the new version fits great. A great job I hope things get better little by little :D
F. Casanova
2023-10-06 07:05:54 +0000 UTCOmg, i had no idea about all of what you were going through in that doc. I should pay attention more on tampas/ webtoon. Either way, i can’t pretend to understand as a creator, but i do understand not wanting to ruin something that you love to the point that you end up hating it. I enjoy your stories and art, so I will be patiently awaiting your return, whenever that may be. Please take care Yaa 💙
John
2023-10-06 03:06:40 +0000 UTCThe choice to make this change the to plot was a great choice. I’m happy that now Scott has room for redemption and how we got to see more into what emotional trauma he was dealing with. I really loved him before the whole picture plot line and was devastated with his actions so I’m really glad that was changed. I’m excited to see where you take the series from here, but of course take your time, your health comes first. Welcome back!
sprouts
2023-10-06 02:14:14 +0000 UTCThis is a good change, Scott can have a good redemption for it's tentation to see what was going on inside of the toilet but i probably would'nt have any if he you kept the old version. This is a great change ! (so excited to see the futur chapter of the story)
Cozotigd Cztdg
2023-10-05 23:44:43 +0000 UTCI enjoy both versions completely but can understand your reasoning for wanting to change that scene in particular. The re-write definitely gives Scott's character more of a dynamic because we can see the turmoil within himself given his background. I hope you continue to prioritize your own health and well-being. We respect your time away and will be waiting for your return!
Olivia Hughmanic
2023-10-05 23:38:29 +0000 UTCWelcome back!!! I like the slight plot change, I think it will be good for Scott’s character development
EstaVS
2023-10-05 23:24:17 +0000 UTCGlad you’re doing better! I like your little updates on twitter/x too, since they are, at the very least, proof of life lol I like how this rework shows more of Scott’s inner turmoil. I think it will make Crush’s confrontation a more interesting, and less combative.
Kenny Crager
2023-10-05 22:46:21 +0000 UTCYour heart was in the right place with this choice. I was afraid you're going to double down on Scott being even more vengeful, manipulative or downright as a sociopath lusting for power over others but that simply would be to jarring with how much you fleshed out his traumatic flashbacks and how hurt he was. I'm glad you kept the conflict, but changed his actions so that he still has hope to grow.
Guy Mendes
2023-10-05 22:45:45 +0000 UTCalso so proud of you for taking the time you need! you’re an amazing artist and what you do with crush3d wows me all the time. you deserve to prioritize yourself and figure out what you really want. i hope in the future i can get some of your books!!!
apathyprince
2023-10-05 22:44:21 +0000 UTCaaaaaaaaa i love what you did with this so much. scott is so real and human in this. as someone with severe OCD i am melting into the floor with how relatable this makes scott.
apathyprince
2023-10-05 22:43:17 +0000 UTCHi :) please take all the time you need to get better and I wish you all the best! The new version is really good and gives scott much more depth, loved him in the old version and I think it will be the same here as well :) thanks for keeping the old version up, it's cool to see the changes and what you think about it! And regarding the old printed version. I would also love to buy it, for collectors sake as well. :) if you are comfortable with it. Thanks for your awesome work!
Lonsklonsk
2023-10-05 22:35:51 +0000 UTCThat’s a very good way of putting it and I totally agree!
Hannah Cox
2023-10-05 22:33:33 +0000 UTCThirded
Aniratac
2023-10-05 22:16:54 +0000 UTCI feel like Scott is much more relatable in this scean. It's clear how his mother taking his personal power away makes him crave power over others. It's very insightful.
Natalie
2023-10-05 22:10:04 +0000 UTCI also want to second both Hannah and Jessica about purchasing a volume 2! I'd love to have it on my shelf with volume one! But no pressure! I'm so happy you posted!
4.anxiety
2023-10-05 22:04:34 +0000 UTCThis version is better ! I loved it! Also i hope you get better and take all the time you need 🫶🏻🫶🏻🫶🏻
Hele 606
2023-10-05 22:02:53 +0000 UTCI’m glad Scott is becoming a better person, at least somewhat. I like Scott 🥺
Azou
2023-10-05 22:02:11 +0000 UTCMyself and I’m sure plenty of others would totally buy them if you did decide to sell them again! But no pressure if you don’t want to, like Jessica said! 💖
Hannah Cox
2023-10-05 21:57:38 +0000 UTCThank you so so much for replying!! Totally understandable as well. Either way, take your time with that decision as you need :)
Jessica
2023-10-05 21:56:37 +0000 UTCI sadly still have a stock of about 50 books like that, so I'm considering selling them for a cheaper price and to simply add a little booklet (That I could give out for past buyers) of the new scene, as the print is otherwise very nice and the "mistake" is just on the last 20 pages of 350. Throwing them all away would break my heart (and financial neck) a bit :'/... But I am not yet sure about any of it.
Yaa
2023-10-05 21:53:57 +0000 UTCWhat GenM said! Hope you’re doing better and take as much time as you need to! As far as the comic goes, I really like the new version! I feel like it fits well with the character of Scott as he was before in the new version also! ☺️
Hannah Cox
2023-10-05 21:53:47 +0000 UTCOmg, I am so happy you're back! I didn't know you were redoing this scene . Tbh this one scared me even more than the last one but I like it better? It sort of sets Scott up as this person who has these dangerous thoughts but also tries to fight them. It makes him more of an interesting character , more human I suppose. And @lol at him just chilling there at the end. Like get out, bro!
Peak
2023-10-05 21:50:55 +0000 UTCIncredible rework!! ♥️♥️ Your story means so much to me and many others. One question I had if you feel comfortable answering is if you have any left over volume 2’s which were sold at Dokomi, and if so, would you consider ever selling them one day for collectors sake? It’s completely understandable if you’d rather not! You have my continued support ☺️ Thank you for the care you treat hard topics with. And I hope good things for your health inside and out. Take care!
Jessica
2023-10-05 21:49:40 +0000 UTCSame here :)
Delectatione
2023-10-05 21:45:43 +0000 UTCThis is a good rewrite I think
Diego P
2023-10-05 21:45:10 +0000 UTCI like this version better. Seeing Scott’s internal thoughts on his conflicts is illuminating. Take care of yourself; I can wait, this comic deals with difficult issues so I can understand the mental/emotional toll it can take on you.
JH
2023-10-05 21:43:07 +0000 UTCGonna be honest, now that I know the Polaroid wasn’t gonna be a plot device/used properly in the plot, but just for a joke and to ground Scott’s character as a creepy and quite honestly disgusting person… I’m so incredibly glad you’re changing it. I would’ve been mad if scott was dirtied like that and all that became of it was an awkward fourth wall break joke, since I at least liked Scott in the old version of the comic (couldn’t quite make up my mind about this version yet) :( Please I don’t mean to be mean and thanks for not letting it up that way <3
Aniratac
2023-10-05 21:40:33 +0000 UTCI was JUST thinking about you and hoping you were doing better. Take as much time as you need though, I'll go read this post now, but I'm glad to see the update regardless! Edit: Also I really like the reworked story here, looking forward to seeing how the plot unfolds
GenM
2023-10-05 21:32:51 +0000 UTC
