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C!! 3: 119-122

A small update, before I go on to the next part that needs to go back to the storyboard draft :-)

C!! 3: 119-122 C!! 3: 119-122 C!! 3: 119-122 C!! 3: 119-122

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*sees Till* Me: “That little boy is a child, I don’t wanna see you sniffing around him anymore this afternoon do you understand, boy have you lost your mind because I’ll help you find it!”

Logan

aaaaah.... this is gonna hurt like a bitch 😭❤️

Mara

Oh Till...there he finally is! But his words run deep "I´m seriously not a good catch" It´s like he wants to warn Carter - about himself. Thats why I don´t see Till as completely bad. He knows that what he´s doing is wrong...and tries to stop it? But it´s just not enough...

Grumpy McFatcat

Aaah!!! I love it so much! The atmosphere and baby Crush and the eyes and the transition into the flashback and the dialogue and the expressions ahhh!!❤️❤️❤️

Zol

Based upon his gaze in the middle page there. It sounds like hockey isn't the only thing he need to learn to love again. Poor guy.

Thingymabob

Gorgeous pages!

Diego P

Oh noooo baby carter with braces and so much hope in his eyes it makes me cryyy knowing what will happen 😭😭😭 Hes so young and everything, he doesnt deserve this... But the hole in the igloo having the moon at the same place as the light reflex in tills eyes? And his eyes looking like the night sky? Wow. Just wow. I love it. I hate Till but i love his eyes

Nadine_naddiru

Ahh excellent art as always! The characters' expressions are just so real. ✨ I noticed the scar too, and I'm curious now.

Swamp Witch

Also, i love how you put the night sky in the eye and comparing it to the night sky through the igloo hole. Beautifully done! Keep up doing the awesomest art works, please!!! 😁👍🙏🙏🙏🙏❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Robert

I was pretty affected by his empty look on the second page. But that’s a powerful impact! I also noticed a scar on his tummy and it makes me think that something bad did happen to him possibly because of other guy in next pages?? 🥺🥺🥺🥺

Robert

I love Carters empty look on the second page! So much foreshadowing!!

ollisnake

I love this story and your art but I have to admit, I'm never really ready for my heart to get crush3d again by his back story. I love it but... the feels!

Hryfna


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