Early Page - Chap 11 PG10
Added 2021-03-29 04:39:49 +0000 UTCHelena is part of Sesam's faction as you can probably tell from her butterfly markings~ But more on that later ;D
Thanks so much for all the thoughtful comments on these past few pages! We'll get back to you all asap! 💕💕💕
Comments
Ahhh so glad you're liking the new characters! There will definitely be more about all of them in this chapter and the next 💕(Especially Cyrille) Thanks so much! It can sometimes be a challenge to know who and how much to reveal. Oh hehe, he's telling Vivi to be careful because she's being sneaky about entering the library, and may or may not be "borrowing" some books lol. But more on that later XD Oh it was probably pretty chilly that morning at Vivi's shop, but she has both practical and magical ways of keeping things warm 😆✨
KaiJu
2021-03-30 20:03:46 +0000 UTCHehe~ we shall see~ 💖🤩✨✨
KaiJu
2021-03-30 19:27:16 +0000 UTCAww doesn't Sulvain look lovely! I hope he and Raz get an opportunity to run away and kiss somewhere <3
Mildred
2021-03-30 15:56:56 +0000 UTCI love it! And yay for new characters! Helena seems very cool (and stoic) in contrast to Vivi’s liveliness. I’m now curious to know more about each of them and their relationship. I am also intrigued to learn more about Cyrille and Elouan. I really like how you are introducing new characters throughout the story, and slowly revealing more and more about each person we already know. So intriguing and great story telling. And the wheat on Sulvain’s jacket looks awesome and very appropriate for him. :-) He seems to be waiting for Raziol. I wonder if by now Raziol has learned some sign language and it will be easier for them to talk to each other. I also wonder why he’s telling her to be careful. I can’t help but worry that someone will find them together and that will be a problem. Who knows though. Finally, I had one last question. It seems that this is taking place during winter/early spring, when I would assume it is quite cold in this part of the world. It just seems that nobody is really dressed for cold weather. Maybe not so much in March, but when they were at Vivi’s shop, it seemed like spring. Maybe that’s just part of her magic? Do her little bugs die in the cold? Does she have a place to raise bugs, like a heated indoor garden/greenhouse/butterfly house attached to her shop? This is what my crazy brain wonders, lol.
Blusalee
2021-03-29 20:21:41 +0000 UTC
