Early Page - Chap 10 PG55
Added 2020-12-14 04:44:32 +0000 UTCOh Raziol ;_; <3
More early pages coming soon!
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;__; 💕💕💕 Thanks so much Meagan! So glad you like the lighting!
KaiJu
2020-12-31 07:17:29 +0000 UTCYep yep, Bevan and his mom were the biggest heartaches but there were a few smaller partings as well. Bevan was gender-fluid but presented as male most of the time do to societal constraints. It wasn't super clear in the dialogue so I totally get your confusion. :) Oh there will definitely be some in depth backstory about Udaya don't you worry! ^___^💕💕 Just later in the story~ Sulvain doesn't heal like a normal person, in fact he won't heal at all without proper treatment like the way Vivi healed him in chapter 7. Thanks so much Blusalee! Your comments are also so fun to read! We're so glad you're enjoying the story!💖✨
KaiJu
2020-12-31 07:15:53 +0000 UTCooh man raziol in this page hits real close to home i really felt his emotions 😭💗 Also very specific comment but i've absolutely LOVED the way you've done the lighting over these past handful of pages and how it mirrors emotions, i'm so blown away!!
Meagan M
2020-12-14 21:52:04 +0000 UTCAww, poor Raziol. First his mother, then Bevan… were there more? He said “they always.” Just curious. And just to refresh my memory, Bevan was a woman who disguised herself and lived as a man, right? Or was she/he trans? I’m not sure I really understood what she/he was, though I guess it doesn’t really matter. Just curious. Anyway… I agree that that was one FANTASTIC kiss. Whoo boy, is it hot in here? XD I hope that helps convey how much Sulvain cares about him. Come to think of it, it could actually be a good segue for him to talk about his previous relationship/immortality. Like “You have no need to worry… I stayed with my wife until she died…” ^_^; (Raz: WHUT @_@). As interested as I am in Raz and Sulvain's story, I'm equally fascinated about Sulvain and Udaya's life together as well. Looking forward to the backstory. If you're looking for extra sketch ideas- maybe one of the three of them doing something together- like out on the town in modern times, or doing something romantic. Just a thought ^_^. And speaking of Sulvain (this is an aside), does his condition allow him to heal faster than a regular human? I assume not, since he got injured and had to be treated like it was a normal wound, even though it was magical stitches. Me and my wandering mind. This amazing story just has me so enthralled. It takes a lot for something to keep my attention for this long, but I am always so excited to see there is an update and find out what happens next! (Me rambling as always) Thank you dear authors. (The super sexiness also helps, lol)
Blusalee
2020-12-14 16:08:11 +0000 UTC
