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Tunnel Rat Chapter 327

Pantsing vs. Planning
This discussion pops up in writing groups for web serials almost weekly. 'Pantsing' or 'Writing by the seat of your pants' means just tossing down the ideas as they come to you. I do a ton of that. Partly because I think about upcoming chapters a lot. By contrast, some people meticulously plan things out chapter by chapter for an entire book and then start writing.

Litrpg takes a little of both. And I'm rediscovering that as Milo returns to GENESIS, and begins exploring again. As usual, my pantsing style led to lots of chapters I had never imagined I'd be writing, expanding on the rough outline quite a bit. And as I return to writing about the game world, I went looking for all my notes showing me all of Milo's skills, weapons, items, and exactly where he was at the time he ran off to deal with the real world.

And those notes don't exist. I think I got so carried away with the new storylines that I utterly failed in the planning part. This resulted in the ongoing project of re-reading 50 some chapters and catching up all of my notes. "Oh, what's this? 18 points from killing a giant mole with the girls? Did he he ever spend those?" Nope, never did.

So we'll be doing a little more with stats and skills at the start of this part of his story, catching both the Author and the Readers up to speed with his abilities and stats.

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Milo sat and watched the chaos aboard Captain Pike's ship from above, sitting at the edge of the road the Engineers had carved into the cliff face. He'd climbed up to the road, away from the water as the water nearest to him churned with enraged eels. The constant swarming of small eels around the docks had annoyed the Captain and distracted his crew. Twice more eels had jumped from the water to attack Milo, both of the fishy monsters only about six feet long but with sharp teeth. They couldn't surprise him any longer, and both times he slashed with his claws, taking off their heads with ease. They were currently cooking on the brazier and he was taking a break

The larger eels were quickly butchered by the ogre and cut into two-foot segments. One went to his grill and the rest to his ship to be stuffed in barrels with salt. No ogre ever let food go to waste. Two sailors were told to gather up the guts and organs. "Take those tasty bits over to The Salty Mermaid and tell the cook I expect to have some tripe pies when I get back from fishing. Grab any of the lads drinking there and tell them to get their asses back to the ship, then check the other bars. We're going eel fishing, and damned soon."

Milo had tried a slice of roasted eel at the Captain's urging. He was surprised to find he actually liked the taste. Eel had a spicy-fishy flavor and the meat was firm when cooked. It wasn't cheese or puffcakes by a long shot, but it wasn't bad. Told to stay away from the boat and out of the way of the crew, he rested, chewed on a chunk of eel, and finally looked at his messages.

Oh, there you are. Welcome Back. Are we ready to get caught up with our paperwork before causing more trouble? You've been so busy lately, almost like you were burning the candle at both ends. I've gone to quite a bit of trouble to organize things for you. It's the least I can do for someone who reunited me with my loved ones. You've been moved from 'Dangerous Threat' up to 'Merely Annoying' status. Don't expect much from that, but I will hold my Snark down to 90% of normal.

Reminder: You have 18 unused Enhancement points earned for killing The Tunnel Tyrant.

Quest Reward (Rescuing Jeremy): The Goddess Mnemosyne has rewarded you 20 Enhancement Points for rescuing Dr. Jeremy Cooper. She requests that you visit her someday and tell her the epic tale in your own words. Icarus tried, and while she loved talking to each of his incarnations his memories of the day are jumbled.

Quest Reward (Fixing the Dungeon You Broke): Wistyburble, the Underodent, rewards Sir Larry, Knight of the Jackalope, and Squire Squeak with 15 Enhancement Points for fixing and improving her dungeon. She also approves of the proposed trade agreement between Hippityhop Hollow and Limburgher Hollow but leaves it to you to find the Trade Route.

Quest Reward (Knight of the Jackalope): Prince Leporidon, Knight of the Jackalope (retired) rewards his heir, Sir Larry, his Sir Larry's Trusty Squire, and his Brave Hound with one (1) Large Favor, 50 Enhancement Points, and Travel Papers bearing his mark that gives you the freedom to enter the Fae Lands. You are welcome in his castle at any time and encouraged to visit.

Quest Reward (The Cure for Bone Blight): Mama Laveau thanks you for curing the Bone Blight in one of her children and showing her how to cure others. She rewards you with 10 Enhancement Points and invites you to stop by Hungrytown anytime for a slice of pie.

Ares, God of War has bestowed the Title of 'Godslayer' upon General Maximus and hopes to see him travel to this world again.

You have gained experience in the following skills:
Diplomacy (CHR): 300 points.
Magi-Tech (INT): 6000 points.
Rune Carving (DEX): 1000 points.
Claws of Alta Viator (DEX): 1000 points.
Tail-Fighting (DEX): 500 points.
System Rune Lore (INT): 2000 points.
Runic Casting (INT): 500 points.
Stealthy Skulking (WIS) 500 points.
Engineering (INT): 1500 points.
Manipulate Bone (WIS): 500 points
....and many more small gains. I'm sure you know how to use a character sheet at this point. OH! One more thing!
Ding! Ding!
Welcome to Level 13: You gain +200 Health, +200 Stamina, and +200 Mana.


Milo found it odd to be reading a System message after having met the person who was the System. Knowing what Llama had gone through, he was surprised at his sarcasm. If anything Milo was surprised he wasn't twice as strange.

He longed to spend some time looking at all the options for spending his Enhancement Points, but he didn't have time for that today. Still, there were some things he knew he'd be getting that would help with what was sure to be a dangerous experience.

He spent 30 Enhancement Points to buy three points of Toughness and three points of Constitution. With Toughness adding +80 health per point, and Constitution another +50 health for each point, that was another 390 Health. His total increased from 6100 to 6690. He debated buying either Extra Health or Near Fiendish Regeneration. Buying Extra Health 2, 3, and 4 would give him +650 health for 30 Enhancement Points. But the next level of regeneration would put him nearly even with Larry and the girls. His gut told him to go with Near Fiendish Regeneration and he paid the 40 points for it. Extra Health could be purchased bit by bit. Buying the big abilities, especially abilities that most other players couldn't get, was more optimal. That left him with 43 points left to spend, still a considerable chunk. On a whim, he clicked on Hekate's blessing of Canine Speech. Better communication with his pet was important.

There were benefits to healing fast, especially for someone who got hurt as much as he did. Healing twenty-four times as fast would let him bounce back quickly from almost anything. If he was only down health, he would regenerate to full in an hour or less. More serious injuries would still take longer than health, but even a day would cure all but the worst injury. A secondary aspect was regenerating his bones. Some of his spells needed a bone to cast the spell, and if he didn't have one handy, the material came from him. His experience after the fight with the World Boss had taught him how horrible that was. He carefully moved down to where a crewman was cooking eel for Captain Pike and stole a large chunk. Regeneration made him hungry, so he might as well start the voyage full.

Pike seemed ready to go and was yelling for everyone to get aboard. Milo leaped from the back of the docks to the gunwale and then to the main mast, quickly climbing to the crow's nest. Pike saw him at the top and grinned. "Good thinking. No sense letting the eels smell you until we get out to the feeding grounds with the big ones."

Thoughts of 'big eels' made Milo clench his hands and manifest his claws. He'd been thinking defense. But these were eels! Captain Pike wasn't going to fishing just to fill his belly. If there was something larger out there, the Monster Hunter would find it. He threw points into the next level of bonus damage to Claws of Alta Viator. STR increased his claw damage as well, and while mining would help him raise his STR, an extra three ranks from Enhancement Points would help him today, and the extra 90 Health was a nice bonus. He'd ignored Extra-Stabby until now, thinking of it as more of an assassin skill and himself as an explorer. But today he was hunting eels, and a better chance at critical damage could make a difference.

With only a few points left, he looked at the water. His last points went into Breathless 2. If Pike went looking for something big with himself as bait, he calculated he had at most a 3% chance of staying dry.

Less than twenty minutes after Pike had decided to go hunting, the ship was pushing off of the docks and a longboat was pulling them out of the cavern. With the first hint of wind the foresail caught and the ship headed out into the deep bay. The two pirate ships were waiting for the fishing fleet that was coming into the bay and tightening their formation.

Milo began designing a Runic Formation while staring at the pirate ships and scanning the water for the sign of eels.

Comments

I know this feeling.

Aegir

I think i found a good reward and that would be something old and bone related that he could use for the extra rib ritual. It would be something Billy would not value at all and Milo would and there would definetly be some of that around Gadobhra.

Findell

I don't have a discord. Maybe someday. But right now I am trimming my life to help me concentrate on writing and editing, getting rid of anything that can suck up my time (Looking at you, facebook and Vintage story.) The last three days, for instance was 30 hours of editing Tunnel Rat 2. Just finished the last chapter. Tonite I'll get back to writing chapters for both stories and Thursday start editing the next volume. If I had a discord, I'd spend too much time on it. :)

Michael Clark

Is there not a discord? These books have been keeping me going.

Kellen Clifford

She used to be human. Her father is the butcher of the pit who used to be human as well.

Blue Talon

It’s possible she had a weak trait of the eel-bone beast enmity due to her being of mixed blood/species.

Ender419

Build a magic/quantum computer in the hollow

Aaron

Ahhhh I see, nevermind

Jonah of the Whale

They should, I just forget :(

Michael Clark

Its only in the Royalroad chapter. The pateron chapters dont get the major updates/edits.

Findell

When I first put up the chapter where Milo leaves, this group suggested that there be a few things added to the chapter. I added a goodbye between Milo and Vladimir, Milo helping the crippled girl in hungrytown, and stopping by the Tavern.

Michael Clark

Just to check but I don't believe the curing of bone blight in hungrytown was addressed unless it happened 'off-camera' or I just missed it?

Jonah of the Whale

Build something for the hollow like a brewery or some other type machinery type thing to allow more cheese to be made.

Findell

Well he did get 100 wheels of stinky cheese for the piece of metal he used. I dont recall any other rewards.

Findell

Just a thought, what would Milo do with builders points?

Daniel Zellmer

One would wonder why the dragon bunny under rodent dungeon, boss didn’t let dislike Milo on site? Besides the whole ruining her dungeon thing…

Daniel Zellmer

If the system rewarded Billy for it, as the one who ordered the stone, it'd make sense everyone else who worked on it gets rewarded too. Then again, I wouldn't put it past Llama to make it 'if you want to get a reward for your work in his success, go talk to Billy and get him to pay up'

Oskatat

This is one of the benefits of Patreon that I keep trying to tell other authors about. You guys give me a level of feedback that I don't get elsewhere. I was going back and forth about a reward from Billy. I'll add that in. Thanks

Michael Clark

Thanks, I will reread Tunnel Rat when it comes out on KU

Blue Talon

Agreed, Murdering bosses (tough as that often can be) is something everyone can do, but how many creatures in the world of Genisis can do serious math? that should gets its own, proper reward

Felix H.

The great bone beasts.

Findell

Bone-Beasts is the most used name. Both the Eels (dragons) and the Bone-Beasts were involved in the early terraforming process of the world/universe. What started the bitter enmity between them is lost to history. The Bone-Beasts made use of Ancient Runes/(pre-engine/system machine language) while the eels were more aligned with mana and elemental power. Eels are far more numerous now, with lots of lesser varieties and only a few true dragons left, and even those are a far cry from the creatures that moved the stars around for Astreus.

Michael Clark

Nothing from the Baron for his work on the Teleport Stone? There was EXTREME Project management and Applied Wrench Application with that job.

Kensai

Remind me, what is the opposite of eels? I forgot what spieces Milo inherited from Alta Viator.

Blue Talon


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