"Thick as Thieves - Chapter 4" - Fat Fur
Added 2025-03-21 15:23:08 +0000 UTCHere's the 4th chapter of my serialized fat fur novella, "Thick as Thieves."
Kard and Clive's apprenticeship under Jed continues, and both thieves are given news of their first big heist.
Comments
You're such an expert at weaving imagery, but i really admire the way you depict the slow and steady progress of a paunch outgrowing its clothes π³π«Ά And the little bits here and there where they are prodding or getting used to their new sizes, gosh x'3 and the way Clive seems to always love his middle being manipulated ππ
Alfyn
2025-06-09 19:42:50 +0000 UTCOops, you were right! Did a quick little fix to the instance of me mixing him up with the skunk cookshop owner.
IndigoRho
2025-03-22 16:00:38 +0000 UTCWelp, so much for theories of Uncle Jed being a kindly gentleman secretly trying to put two young thieves on a lawful path. Though I can't say I'm disappointed, this is far more fun. Do I dare speculate Jed doesn't actually plan for his apprentice success... perhaps the Monastery of Myron partakes in a few secret rituals of the more shady kind... the kind that needs a few outsiders who won't be noticed missing, and Jed is the greased paw to deliver. Or maybe this is very wishful thinking heh. One tiny thing, it seems a raccoon turns into a skunk unless I read it wrong.
Crowbar
2025-03-21 19:26:14 +0000 UTC
