Enhanced concept:

Alright... I've done some brainstorming. Tried to cut away unnecessary pages and came up with the following:

(Each number represents a page)

1 Introduction to story (reporter chasing clues/investigating former prison facility)

2 Turns out it’s a prison facility and the protagonist is caught, stripped naked, handled by machines (image: struggling and fighting against the machines)

3 The protagonist is placed in a vacbed and sucked stuck in place. (image: vacbed transport)

4 The protagonist is ‘handled’ by more machines as they transform her body while still in the vacbed. She falls asleep. (image: vacbed with multiple machine arms/needles showing above it)

5 The protagonist awakes a few hours later covered with a new skin which has been glued seamlessly together by the machines. Her breasts are much larger now and feel odd. Her pussy and clitoris are extremely sensitive for some reason. (Image: protagonist is held in place by machine arms while looking down to her new transformed body)

6 The protagonist is forced to follow a transport line on the ceiling. Some kind of chastity device capable of teasing her has been locked around her. The chastity device is hooked up to a ceiling module following mounted rails. It works harder/punishes the protagonist more based on her performance. (the machine actively monitors her orgasm and tries to keep her on the edge of orgasm by increasing/decreasing energy constantly. (Image: the protagonist is dragged forward by a thick metal wire connected to her chastity belt)

7 The protagonist learns there are more women locked in this facility. They are most likely investigators/reporters who had the same idea. Now they are all kept as a prisoners by the system. (Image: The protagonist sees multiple women, all transformed and kept in tight rubber, unable to speak with each other while still able to look around. Each one is locked in a similar chastity device)

8 The Protagonist is brought to her cell where she is locked in a small pod before it sinks into the ground to keep her during the night. - The end

And that concludes all pages. I'm curious what people think of this. I kept it short. No 20 page comic. No Miss Mason. No Linn Danger. No universe with stories overlapping/connected to each other. No dream sequence. Bad ending included (meaning getting in and never getting out again).

Thoughts? Feedback?