Before I say anything: Thank you all for your patience. I think the text on both pages now really add to the story and make it more clear as to what is really going on. I'm sure both pages equally tell a lot about future pages to come. This is why I needed to explain this properly so things don't get confusing in the end. This was one of the reasons why I stopped working with text on images since the text space was always limited and sometimes that really ruins the story. Luckily, I had supporters willing to wait a few days for me to sort this out. Thank you all!.
*IMPORTANT NOTE: Page 12 + 13 + 14 all received text versions and I added a 3rd variant to image 12 (sleeping pod halfway in the ground). Also, Page 12 and 13 had small corrections in their texts! (Thank you Chrispin for pointing out the logic flaw in page 12) Any more feedback is welcome!
Find everything > Dropbox folder 612 (and page 12 in 611)
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