Lyana Frostburn ATGPS 09
Added 2023-10-31 19:33:28 +0000 UTCThis image took some time... A lot of delays beforehand and this one with 2 characters, a big background etc etc... I kinda pushed to get it out today. I'm sure if I worked even longer on it that it might've gotten better/more detailed. Still, the end result is something I'm very proud of even though I know that the content output this month suffered very badly.
Before you jump to conclusions: This piece will get text versions + a view of the area without the icons.
I hope you like the end result as much as I do. I did however doubt the icons in the view and how they should look like. I first wanted to make them square and add text but that would sort of kill the mystery. I then came up with the icons and how they could become smaller or bigger depending on how far Lyana was from them. I think its a nice tough but your feedback is much appreciated if you have a better idea.
After uploading the text versions I'm continuing work with page 10!
Have a nice day everyone <3
Comments
That's a good point that I hadn't realized. Glad you like the idea though!
Wizard85
2023-11-01 19:43:03 +0000 UTCNice idea and I could see it working for a ponygirl story, although Lyana is supposedly "deaf" now. Only Miss Mason can talk to her through the ear implants. Anyone else talking to her or calling her name will never be heard. Therefore I don't see much value in giving the ponies pet names since they won't be used much. (at least, not for this story but future stories this might be fun).
Lerra22
2023-11-01 11:44:28 +0000 UTCHappy to read you like it so far. I hope future images will please you too. This month there isn't much on the schedule so I hope I can post more than previous month.
Lerra22
2023-11-01 11:42:00 +0000 UTCBeautiful image, and the whole augmented reality trope is super creative! As far as Lyana's further training, would you be open to her being trained to respond to a pet name more suitable to a pony; something like "Pepper" or "Misty"(just spitballin' here). Perhaps she would encounter other ponygirls further in training that have already forgotten their real names and now only respond to their ponygirl names.
Wizard85
2023-10-31 22:40:34 +0000 UTCCanβt wait so eager to find out what happens next ππππ
Yautja201
2023-10-31 20:28:04 +0000 UTC
