Lessons learned 606 [Chapter 1]

Alright... This turned out to be a lot more work than I anticipated. Main reasons: 1: Creating the narrative for the entire story and dividing it in multiple chunks/chapters was hard (Trying to keep a natural flow in the story without giving it all away in the first chapters and adding at least some character development despite my usual 1-off stories). 2: I've never been good at backgrounds and I decided to take my time and actually learn how to create something that was at least acceptable and consistent with the other backgrounds of the story. 3: The character on the image has many elements that can be turned on/off or slightly fade away to create a see through effect. Each element comes with its own problems and small edits. It took me a lot longer to set it all up and the stupid thing is: I didn't include most of them in chapter 1 since the first chapter is not going that 'deep' into the kink and bondage aspects. I figured I would add the images related to the story when the story reaches that point. (it makes sense right?). The result however is this 17 page chapter and merely 4 images to accompany it. Should I say sorry? I'm not sure... I feel bad for not delivering more this month and I know there are people who are not liking this AT ALL but at the same time I worked my ass off to get it all done and I know there is still a lot coming. Other than that, people that support me stated multiple times they wanted stories and images that were more meaningful to actually read. The single stories accompanied with images are nice but people preferred longer stories with more images to support the story and carry more weight in overal. As of now I can immediately continue writing chapter 2 which will feature a lot more kinky content (both in the story and the images). The 3rd chapter will push the kink level even further and I've dabbled with the thought of adding a second (brand new) image. Anyway... Let me know if you like the story or not and what I can do to improve it. The second background (inside the house) is rushed and quite simple but I really didn't want to let you wait any longer. Other than that it gets the job done I think. Let me know what you think!