I'm gonna be honest: The image turned out great but the story... I started it with a rough setup and realized at some point it was simply too long. There's too much talk, it's too complicated in some parts and there's not enough sexy talk involved. It's like 90% talk/story and only 10 sexy talk. I'm confident I could've done a better job but I said I was going to upload today so I felt pressured into uploading today and this is what it turned into. That said, I'm probably going to re-write this story into something less complicated/more understandable and with more sexy time involved because the concept has good potential I think. So if you're a reader and you only want the best without spoilers, wait for the second version to come out. if you don't mind it or don't read at all I hope you enjoy whatever you find.
Brokk
2021-02-05 20:04:09 +0000 UTC