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NEW VIDEO: Abigail Shrier is terrible monster lady, let's read her book!

Hopefully, it hasn't been too long. I'm pretty happy with how this one turned out. I hope you will be too. Any comments, suggestions about improvements are always greatly appreciated.

NEW VIDEO: Abigail Shrier is terrible monster lady, let's read her book!

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It's always been too long, but it's always worth the wait. Great video. Since you're looking for feedback, I caught these while watching: 8:29 extra "with" in the last sentence ("with plagued with" instead of "plagued with") 13:15 "ken" unless that's intentional lol 15:20 random close bracket on the last sentence 22:55 missing word "trapped" in a girl's body 24:40 disaffected with -> from and semicolon -> lowercase L 27:48 remove extra word "actually" also a CW for transphobia at the start might be nice

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