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Chapter Eighty-Six: Departure I

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pure talent keeping those poker faces1

NeoJungleLover

Finally reading this, I love tomes and dagon hahah, I could happily eavesdrop on their hazing of néw recruits every time they do it. I love those two!! Made me giggle! Oh and esmerelda and empress definitely girlfriends then. Poor empress lost her lover though. Sad:(.

SleepyKitten

Today is the day of writing :) It wasn't coming to me over last few days, unfortunately :(

Keene

I saw that you liked my comment, but I did not look closely enough, and I got super excited because I thought there was another chapter to my surprise. It was not my utter dismay. My day has been ruined. Lol🤣

Mason

Hopefully tommorow we get the chappy

Darastrix

Theory Time: The empress was Esmeralda's lover / girlfriend. Part of Esmeralda's soul is with her, but at the end of the day, the empress wants Esmeralda back in some form

Bast

Thanks for the chapter

Mason

Foreshadowing? Thanks for the chapter 🍪

Kees P2

Amelia, do something strange? Never! Love Amelia’s biggest concern being the children. Really makes me love her even more!

Ben Lockwood

Amelia's gunna have an important request for the Empress next time they meet I think ^.^ Thanks for reading!

Keene

Thank you ^.^ writing the hazing was really fun, always a good time when Tomes and Dagon get together! As for figuring it out... Mel has a head start... depends how forthcoming she wants to be with it <3

Keene

You would think she would know to raise flags at this point ^.^ Thanks for reading!

Keene

Can you get married? What kind of silly question is that? Of course you can, I mean who could stop the God, I mean Amelia, from getting what she wants. Also gotta love ally Anathor just being like "GL is the best form of romance". Although Amelia will need to come up with some new super ward that can keep Anathor out so Amelia and Serena can have their alone time.

Mutalith

Serena you fool! What have you done!?

Eridor

Such an enjoyable chapter. So love the hazing of the new recruits! Curious how long it will take some of them to figure out just how close Amelia and Serena are. Looking forward to seeing the mass heal ceremony and what adventures the Vengeance crew will go on.

Puppy Piranha Forever

Surely it'll be fine, right? ...right?

Keene

Good job Serena ya jinxed it...

shootingQuasar1

Thanks for reading!

Keene

Thanks for the chapter

bladepony games

Thornheat sounds strangely lewd... either way, thanks for spotting and fixed ^.^

Keene

“Lord-Prospect Thornheat,” he intoned when he saw them. “Lord Halen. Good morning.” Missing a R in heart here.

As it's partially written, should be ready in two days, as long as I keep going to the library and doing work ^.^ Thank you for the hot chocolate, and for reading!

Keene

For giving me a cookie, I will raise you a hot chocolate. When will the next chappy be rdy?

Darastrix

Oh dear, my internet-driven Americanisation has reared its yanky head once again ^.^ I'll change it!

Keene

Ah, what a point to finish the chapter. Also, I thought you were from the UK, so shouldn't Amelia have been given a chequebook?

Cormac

Thanks for reading <3

Keene

60 hour work weeks :o I hope the series helps ease that stress! Fingers crossed things get easier for you!

Keene

glad u enjoy ur library. I work 60ish hours a week and then an extra 2 hours a day for work prep that i only have time to read.

Garrett Cannon

Thanks you for the chapter! Looking forward to part two ^^

Bast


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